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Aw, this was so sad! :cry: I was a little bit confused about the part with Isaac in a trance, but I got it afterwords... just a little slow today ...

Sorry this took so long, I kind of got sidetracked :D Chapter Seven “Dani! What are you doing?” Ethan asked, shattering Bob Dylan’s voice and bringing a myriad of shouts. ...

Thanks to everyone for their review! :D ~Dommy

Thanks to both of you for the review. And wow, I didn't think my writing was that believable. Thanks, it means a lot to me. :D ~Dommy

Hey, kenni! This was all right. You kind of abandoned the original plot and it got a little confusing. Here's some of the little mistakes i found. “Honestly you’re not ...

Very interesting. I liked it a lot. I liked how your mc was bargaining with Death in the beginning and how she was making sarcastic remarks even while she was ...

I kind of edited in this chapter. It takes place right after Isabelle says that she's her parents' clone. It's just her saying goodbye to a couple of people. The ...

Dream in Technicolor : Thanks so much for your review! I'm so glad you liked it, you brought a big smile to my face. :D ~Dommy

Clo , Thanks so much. The reason Isabelle doesn't think her parents will believe her about the rape is because of the rapist... Once you read the first parts it ...

Thanks for the reviews guys! It isn't really poem like, I agree. ha ha errtu2. Don't worry, you weren't being bitchy at all. The_Vizier Don't you worry either, I take ...

xXxEllaxXx, thank you so much for the review. I do agree with you, having Dani cut herself on the trolley is a little far fetched but I just wanted to ...

Aw man! This was so great! I really liked the whole part with Carmen looking into Sophia's soul, awesome descriptions, and Carmen's reactions to the visions of Isaac. Great suspense, ...

This is really great. I liked the part with Rosalie making fun of Alice's 'feelings' it tied in Edward's description of their special talents. I couldn't really find any mistakes ...

angelcat2958: Thanks for reading it; and don't worry, you weren't harsh at all. ~Dommy :D

This was really interesting. I liked how you put a spin on Snow White's perfect, happy-go-lucky life. Your writing style is very intriguing also, you distribute sarcasm and dark humor ...