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Hi! sorry this took so long for me to get to! :) This is still really interesting. I'm confused by the dreams and what's hunting Bella but the suspense makes ...

I liked this. The sarcasm and humor were great. The others have caught the little mistakes so I won't repeat them. :) I liked the way you went on a ...

Hey Jared! Thanks for messaging me when you posted this, it was as great as the others! I liked how your portrayed Steve's emotions, how he acted like he didn't ...

aww this was so sad! You really did a good job in capturing Sophia's emotions and Isaac's as well. I like the plot twist, I can tell it's going to ...

i8oreos4breakfast, thanks for the review. The title will become clearer at the end of the story, it may take a while but it'll make sense. :D Thanks for reading! ~dommy

Thanks, ashleylee! Yeah, I do admit Ethan's an odd character, I really have to develop him a lot more, I'm not really sure about him myself.... Hmm. I have to ...

Hey guys. I'm not really that sure if I like this chapter too much but here goes nothing! Happy Reading! Veneta’s Young Mothers Shelter Veneta’s Young Mothers Shelter was different ...

Hey, Sunny! This had a slow start but it got more interesting at the end. Just to get the little nitpicking over with... Right at the beginning of the story ...

Hey, DwahnePipe, Okay so this is a good piece. I just suggest adding more details about the photograph itself and more about Adrian. Add his age so we know how ...

salsashanno: Thanks for the review! I'll pm you when i add more :D ~dommy

LOVED IT!! ^enough said ha ha Super excited for more! ~Dommy :D

Thanks to everyone for your reviews, they've helped a lot! And sorry this took so long, I got a little sidetracked. Enjoy: The Worst Thing They Ever Said I said ...

This is fabulously creepy! I love it! I was glued to my seat, it's so addicting. Demeter already corrected some of the little things that I found, the only other ...

hershey, I'm very eager to see where this will go. I do agree, you should expand the chapters if you want to separate them this way. Parts of it were ...

I just read the previous chapters and they're amazingly good. It's presented very well and i can feel your mc's emotions. I'm happy her mother talked to her and said ...