dommy65

hey! this is pretty good. i liked it a lot. I personally liked the metaphors, I thought they added very well to the story. Loved it as always, I can't ...

... so I've had this for a while but wasn't sure if I liked it... Be brutal :-P Stories I thought Anya was kidding when she said the first thing ...

Yay! You're done!! So amazing!! I'm so freaked out tonight.. Probably shouldn't have read this alone with the lights off! This review is pretty much pointless but i just wanted ...

Hey Ash! This was so good! Every chapter gets better! The relationships are stronger in this rewrite. There's more of a hostility between Nora and Sophia, it makes the Carmen ...

Hey! all right... so this was kind of choppy and moved too fast. Well how about i just get the nitpicks over with first. I was sitting in my room ...

Ash! This was so great! I loved it! Sophia and Carmen are so much better than in the previous version. They're closer and more relatable. Great job once again! I ...

Hmm... Interesting. I liked this, it was kind of a little rant on time it was very intriguing. The ending didn't really do it for me- but that's just personal ...

So I found this today... I wrote it during the summer and wanted to know what you guys think of it. Harsh criticism is always welcome. Thanks! The Thoughts of ...

WOW!! loved it!! so much!! this review is pretty much useless but it just keeps getting better with each edit. I can't wait until you post more!! ~Dommy :D

Hey! okay... a tad bit confusing. The metaphors and daydreaming was a little out there and made it hard to follow up until the end. Then it just came together, ...

Okay so first let me tell you I'm on my iPod so I can't do a really good review. Next, loved it!!! The foreshadowing was great and I loved how ...

Xena, Thanks for the review! And for your super xena editing techniques, :) loved them! ~Dommy65

Hey! Loved it! I just didn't really understand the part about the Tower card... maybe you could explain just what that card meant... I'm guessing it's something bad? :? ha ...

Okay, in my opinion, this was way too Poe-ish for me. Saying over and over again that the narrator wasn't insane was the exact thing that Edgar Allen Poe did ...

Breakfast Anya left right after she took a shower and left me to find my own way to the cafeteria. Dressed in my designer jeans, high heel shoes and diamond ...