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I despise people who could even think about doing that to any person :evil: on your story; the descriptions were great and the reader can totally get a sense of ...

Your main character is totally relatable, I've been in that situation and know exactly how she feels! It's a total bummer for her and I can't wait to see how ...

I really liked this. It made me think about what i would think was more important, my own life or other's who i didnt even like. It was really good. ...

Okay that is probably one of the best things I've read on the site. Your metaphors were absolutely amazing. Submit more, man they're great! - Domenique

I love this poem the imagery is amazing and I love how you linked thunder to so many different things. I liked how the rythm changed it was like nothing ...

This is also really really late but I just have to give my opinion on this essay. That essay was written so nicely, I could feel your emotion through it. ...

Okay so after I read Mad's suggestions I revised this and added much more. Thank you so much Mad for your opinion. I remember the day perfectly. I was sitting ...

I remember the day perfectly. I was sitting in my biology class, half listening to Mrs. Colons speak. Basically I was jsut writing song lyrics in the margin of my ...

This is a really good start for a story. Making allison scared and worried makes in the begining her vulnerable and relatable. I think this has great potential and besides ...