dommy65

It's been a long time since I've posted anything from this project, so I thought now was as good as a time as ever. Sorry it's so long! Chapter Five ...

Ha this was soo great! I loved the ending and the thought of a transvestite superhero is amazing!! I'm not going to mention the mistakes because others have already stated ...

Hey, kristiecoo13, This was a really cool idea, and it was executed nicely. The only thing I would suggest is to maybe add more descriptions and feelings. Like instead of ...

okay so this is the second part thing to the story... it's a dream so that's why its all in italics but I hope you all enjoy! Thanks for the ...

I can't tell you how much I like this story! I'm kind of a vampire loving chick haha. Any way I couldn't find any mistakes or anything this is such ...

Hi, unsterblichkeit36 Thanks so much for the review! I actually do have some more of this story, the next part's just a tad bit long (it's a dream and kind ...

All I can say is this was sweet! I really liked the paragraph formation actually. I thought it made the reader a little uncomfortable, it really exhibited the emotions of ...

I think for this story you could go with writing it either in the present or past tense, but I would chose past. Some words you used made it sound ...

Okay so this was just something I randomly started one day and got engrossed in the plot, this is the first half of the first chapter... if you could call ...

Thanks so much to you guys who reviewed this. I fixed all of the mistakes you stated. Thanks for that, I'm not really sure about all the rules of poetry ...

Hey Kris, I really liked the format of this poem, very intriguing, and I liked the muddy tongue part. It's a great poem. -Dommy

Dear Kris, Thanks so much for reviewing my poem! And i totally understand the whole Ode part, it doesn't make sense at all considering the poem, hehe. :lol: Thanks again. ...

Kind of weird mood this morning after my mom said some horrible things to me.... ------ An Ode to My Fabulous Mother You always know what to say To make ...

Hey, Ashley! Okay so I really liked this chapter. Great description, and you really showed how close each of the characters are to each other. The rest of the weekend, ...

Hey, First thing I liked the first half a lot, the second didn't do it for me. I liked the reaction from the older sister but your m.c and the ...