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So, after a ridiculously obnoxious wait, I have the next chapter. I'm sorry it took this long. Thanks for all who have stayed with this story and keep reading. Hope ...

This is such a gorgeous piece. Your descriptions are very well written, and your comparisons are envious, I really wish I could write like that. :) I love the sad ...

Sorry this took me an age to read :D So, this is quite the interesting story you have started. The idea is great. Every one can relate to it. The ...

So, sorry for the ridiculously long wait. Started school a while ago... you know the drill... and have two AP classes to balance. This chapter's kind of just filler but ...

Loving this!! I like Charlie, she's a really interesting person. you've created quite the complex character here, the girl who wants love but in a sense can't give it. Amazing. ...

Hello dearie, Terribly sorry I didn't get to this sooner! It was amazing!!!! Mario is adorable, but Connor seems so hot, i don't know who she should choose!! :D And ...

Okay, so I edited the part where Isabelle tells Peter who got her pregnant and added a little more drama, romance and a happier ending point with the two love ...

You did it again! It's simply wonderful. Certainromances took care of the editing part, so I'm going to focus on the content. You had a nice balance of humor in ...

Dear Hopefulromantic, So this had a good storyline but some things could be tweaked. Laying here on the ground, cold, in pain, alone, and surrounded by his dead friend, but ...

Thanks guys! I'll go fix those little confusing points :D

Chapter Fifteen Secrets Revealed I ran to my room, fighting back the tears and clutching the kicking mound in my stomach. I heard Anya’s sneakers rushing after me and Kristie ...

hey! Oh man! She's pregnant! You had great descriptions, and made the characteristics of Gabe and Em really come out, showing that Gabe is usually very cautious and Em is ...

Hey. Sorry this took me long to post! But it's simply fabulous. Loving the drama with her being pregnant and the love triangle of Gabe, Mario and Connor. You switched ...

Hey Cynara, Thanks for telling me about the new chapter! It's very good, just a couple things... I look down at myself to saw that I was wrap-up in a ...

Hey, Cynara, You have a very interesting story going on here. I just caught a few things that could be tweaked: “Gabe calm down. I bet she’s fine and having ...