dolwright

I liked your poem. Though simple and precise, was very meaningful. Keep writing

i think i love a little bit of everyuthing, but i'm really into jazz music.

i am wriring a romantic fiction of which the title is CROSSROADS, though it's not finished yet, i'm in the concluding chapters, i'l put it in, and make sure to ...

Hi Zana, i'm so sorry this is coming late,i was busy eith this semester exams, i know i promised to give my review..so..here goes...this is absolutely perfect! the way the ...

Wow! i always give the lyrics forum a pass, but this piece got me reading to the end, you could actually go platinum with this, good work. If this was ...

Good thinking Rubz! But the lack of paragraphs can be a major turn off to any reader at first. It made the piece seem rushed. But it is an interesting ...

I'm definitely definitely impressed, i love the description used , and generally, i would say, a good job! keep it up!

Brilliant! i love the quick change of events, and also the tone used...I'll definitely love to read more.

I think you were right when you said it was lame at first, but reading through it actually made sense, i liked the connection you were trying to make with ...

Great work, i like the effect your poem brings, but one thing though, the stanzas did not have a uniform rhyme pattern, but all the same, kudos.

funny story, though I'm thinking the tomato and orange represents some human characters that would rather be represented as tomatoes and oranges, just guessing, anyways, your story is good, but ...

i agree with the first first i thought this was a parting between two lovers, it was entertaining though.

I have not read the whole story yet but i think i want to do that after reading this part, I'm sure it's an interesting plot.

This was a good story from start to finish...the storyline paints a perfect picture of most young girls addiction to looking slim and exceptionally thin, not minding the anorexia and ...

That was impressive i must say, memories can be pleasant but sometimes they are hard to live with. I like the rhyming in the beginning lines, but i observed the ...