dolwright

Hi, This article is good, and would have been great if you used more imagery. The reader would like an elaborate description of life in Delhi, what you missed the ...

This is absolutely Brilliant. I read about the news of the riot online and I can't help but wonder why some people prefer to be agents of destruction instead of ...

This is Good writing! I assume this line," ...they always like to trade. Information for something shiny is a continuous statement so the period sign should be deleted. The story ...

This is a Job well done except for one correction though: "I fell over (the) said squishy-stubby object" It is amusing and the imagery was on point, it was like ...

I think this poem should is capable of making you a super duper poet. No kidding. Apart from the grammatical structure that needs reconstructing, you did a very good job ...

Good outlay of poem, it just needs some reconstructing; "Music laves her days"; i checked up the word 'laves' in the dictionary and could not find any meaning to it; ...

Thank you shiney, on the issue of it not addressing the Nigerian youth, I think the statistics that show the high level of illiteracy, the number of youths that are ...

I love the expression used in the poem, if I'm not mistaken, this should be an allegory to the fall of man in the garden of has a lot of ...

This is an essay I wrote for a competition, the topic is " What will be the greatest challenge facing your generation over the next decade? Enjoy :) The Economic ...

I totally love this story, it got me hooked from the very start. It's the kind you would want to read a dozen times over. I wonder if this is ...

Interesting piece though in the beginning i was confused about the characters, i had to re-read that path to get the picture clear. Overall it is a lovely story, but ...

I think this piece would definitely make any father proud, though i agree with the others, the poor sentence structures can put the reader off but you did your best ...

I don't think it's depressing...i think it came straight from the heart of the writer, and it's just great writing.

You did a good job on this one! Though i wish the lines were more rich in context and style, it still does a good job in revealing the conflict ...

In my world, there is only me, myself and I Three companions I love the most I am everything I am and more In my own place of fantasy No ...