dolwright

HI, this is something I'm writing for a magazine, the theme is REMNANT, as in a scrap, a fragment or what's left after something, but I need you geniuses approval ...

S he could remember vividly what happened. It was the second semester of high school. She was this new transfer student in class, reserved and quiet and very unlike her ...

That was really dramatic, some case of adultery going on there if I got it right.OK, down to the review part, I think the framework of the poem is good, ...

My love, I hate you, This passion in my heart Stems not from unending springs of love But from the stench of the stale river Where we once knew love ...

This is a song about a girl in a relationship gone sour, she's reminiscing about a time when she felt safe and happy with the guy who is talking about ...

This is beautiful. I love the rhythmic way this sounds. The imagery it depicts is wonderful. Of how fleeting our life and youth is. Yesterday is gone and we only ...

What do you do when something that was so wrong, suddenly becomes right, sometimes we choose and at other times, the choices are made for us, Audrey Simmons, scarred by ...

Hi, I loved your poem. I'm not too sure about the ending though. I think It had a great start and the enthusiasm of the reader should flow through to ...

Thanks sarebear. Unfortunately, the character Isey Daughan does not have a boyfreind/crush/lover. She has no time to pursue all that. Her one and only love interest is Jesus; and yes, ...

Great Imagery there. A little capitalization error there but nothing to disrupt the flow of the poem. It felt like the perfect poem for a book I read, 'The pilgrimage', ...

Get one on one with these characters and feel free to give your opinion ISEY DAUGHAN Isey is a God fearing teenager. She became a christian at the tender age ...

Hi, I love your story. "I stop in that quiet street and think at the thought. When will I have a life of my own? I have it already; dammit! ...

Good writing. Ok, I'll just highlight a few areas that I think needs correction: " In (anaphase) of hers- the word for the scientific division of cells felt kind of ...

By reading this at first glance, I'm not even sure if this is a poem or just someone narrating or describing her fantasies. There was some capitalization errors with the ...

Wow...Lots of anger and emotion displayed in this poem which could have been put to better use in a less offensive choice of language. First of all, this should have ...