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i think this is really good but what is the point you are trying to get across?? i really like how this flows however in the second stanza the rythem ...

this is great,i really like it. but the first line dosn't fit. and what do you mean by "from dead ink"but other than that i think it flows well. however ...

this is really good, but i think it goes on for way to long. and what exactly is this about is it about a girl painting?? this is good and ...

mmm this was really good and i agree with the other comments. but when you say was my tears. don't you mean is my tears?? and don't you want to ...

i think this is really good and i enjoy the expression and the discription. i think that the last four stanzas are great. absolutly amazing. it flows perfectly and it ...

the poem is good but it doesn't really flow as well. the first stanza is odd. what do you mean by "she has scares on and wrists that slowly heal, ...

this is good but i agree with the review above. i think you might need a different center or subject. also the last two stanzas don't fit at all. but ...

hey hannah this is good. but i am not quite sure what you are talking about what do you mean by "the willow will grow to be weeping" and "listin ...