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Hey Stone! Dogs here with your review today! So this is an interesting and very different poem from what I see everyday which is good because I read a lot ...

"Of course I do, I missed you ." you really don't need a period at the end of this quotation, and don't put a space in-between "you" and the period. ...

"I hear the scraping and scratching of metal rubbing up against metal." This is kinda an awkward line because you use metal twice in such close proximity. Also this is ...

"Though she tried they would not gather" This line is repudiative to the last line where you said: "gathering her thoughts". So in this case if you find yourself repeating ...

"It was like seeing a full puzzle all put together instead of seeing just a pile of pieces" This is a little awkwardly worded and you use "seeing" twice in ...

Lol, well thats cool and all but you really need to check for spelling and grammar and all because thats a big part of some people at YWS. If you ...

Hello Lego! Dogs here with your review today! This is a very good piece and I really enjoy it because it does very well what a prologue aims to do. ...

Hello Sana! Dogs here with your review today! This is a good piece, strong imagery and strong emotion that you pour in to here so props to you on that! ...

Hey DreamWalker!!! Dogs here with your review today! I don;t believe I have ever reviewed a piece of yours... anyways here I am!!!! So just on a starting point, I ...

Hello Mithrim! Here is your review as promised ;). So this is a good piece, has a simple and easy idea behind with nice rhyming. Although sometimes in your writing ...

"With face crushed onto the dirt..." There should be a "my" in here. So like: With my face crushed onto the dirt... "A terribly, terribly human" wouldn't the second "terribly" ...

"from all across the world disappeared.And..." There needs to be a space in-between the period and "and" "a few where heros and men of god who never strayed from the ...

I originally started this poem as just writing about writers block but I decided to transform it into something different based off of the song "Unwritten" by Natasha Bedingfield. I ...

Hey ShadowLight!!! Dogs here with your review today!!!!!!!!!!!!!! On a side note... Woot woot! Go Dyslexia!!! BAD SPEELERS UNITE!!! Lol I totally understand what you are saying so I am ...

So ladies and gentlemen I present to you for your delectation and edification the grand chapter 5 of the Magnificent Mansion!!!!!! The plot thickens as Jacque finishes the last of ...