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Helloooo Purpleunicorn! Dogs here with your review today! Ok so this is a really great Idea, this story has lots of potential but there are a few kinks. I have ...

Hey Adriana! Dogs here with your review today! Ok so this is a really good poem here. Great idea and there is some good imagery but there is some room ...

Hello everyone, dogs here with my latest work. I thought I would write the most depressing possible thing ever just cause I felt like it and there has lately been ...

Ladies and gentlemen I am proud to say that I am making my grand return to YWS, although I still won't be on very often at all due to school ...

Hey Duck! Dogs here with your review today! I love your avatar lol! Sooo entertaining! Anywho! This is a good poem, a simple idea and very unique topic. Now really ...

"as she slowed down to tie her on her Eskimo hood" I have no idea what you are trying to say here. Was there a typo somewhere? "But she left ...

"at his advancing form" This is a good line but I think you could do so much better with it like maybe: at his ghostly figure that sauntered ominously closer. ...

Heyyy Rose! Dogs here with your review today! This piece is so good, so fantastic and so amazing overall. You have captured the insanity of your character very well. This ...

Hello Misfit! Dogs here with your review today! Your chapters are getting better and better without a doubt. Soda already got all the grammar errors and everything so i'll just ...

Hey Robert! Dogs here with your review today. So as we can tell obviously this is probably more of a prologue in your book. The job of the prologue is ...

Hey Hudzy! Here is your review as promised! I am really pressed for time as we speak because I am going to eat dinner and then see the new Sherlock ...

"inthe" in the "Trying to lift my sullen spirits. It doesn't work" This is a great line, but I would use a comma instead of a period here. "Trapped in ...

"If he had ever enjoyed his previous life, that was nothing to how he was enjoying this" This line bugs me because it is a little awkwardly worded. Maybe try ...

Hey Lumi! Dogs here with your review today! I read lots of your work and I don't think I've ever reviewed any of your poems as much as I love ...

"Alright, silence class," I find that this line sounds kinda odd coming from a teacher. Maybe "quiet class". "like!, Audrey exclaimed, it's suicide, it's like alum water and vinegar, put ...