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well ummmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm so uhhhhhhhh i think that you need a more distinct subject with perhaps less profanity. and i don't get what you are trying to send as a subject. ...

wow kat that was amazing. however in the second stanza at the beginning you say "you put it out love" are you adressing love?? and is the "i used to ...

alyssa this is good but what is the point of the pink toes?? you jump from talking about a book to talking about your toes. you should focus on either ...

this is great Mandy but the rhythm is just a little off. and at the beginning when you said "i thought i was alive until i saw your face. that ...

i can totally relate to this and i think it is really good. however the first two lines what do you mean when you say "eyes wide shut" and "mouth ...

i think this is really good but what is the point you are trying to get across?? i really like how this flows however in the second stanza the rythem ...

i am not entirely sure what to call this one. i am open to all feed back. I knock on men's door and slit there throats in the night I ...

this is great,i really like it. but the first line dosn't fit. and what do you mean by "from dead ink"but other than that i think it flows well. however ...

this is really good, but i think it goes on for way to long. and what exactly is this about is it about a girl painting?? this is good and ...

mmm this was really good and i agree with the other comments. but when you say was my tears. don't you mean is my tears?? and don't you want to ...

i think this is really good and i enjoy the expression and the discription. i think that the last four stanzas are great. absolutly amazing. it flows perfectly and it ...

the poem is good but it doesn't really flow as well. the first stanza is odd. what do you mean by "she has scares on and wrists that slowly heal, ...

this is good but i agree with the review above. i think you might need a different center or subject. also the last two stanzas don't fit at all. but ...

i agree with the comments above like blue dragon said the jump between midnight and sunrise was a little long however i would suggest maybe adding one other stanza maybe ...

hey hannah this is good. but i am not quite sure what you are talking about what do you mean by "the willow will grow to be weeping" and "listin ...