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okay i will work on it thankyou for your help

hey hey hey, dogs here i think that this is a beautiful poem. i truly enjoy reading all of your poems. this flows great and it sounds really good. unfortunately ...

hey flyer this is dogs I just wanted to say that this poem was GREAT AND I REALLY REALLY LOVE IT. i can't really find anything bad to say. ignore ...

.......................................... AMAZING. THIS WAS GREAT I CAN'T FIND ANYTHING BAD I LOVED THE DESCRIPTION AND I THINK THAT THIS IS JUST PERFECT. however there are a few minor spelling issue

Hey ray, dogs here. THis is a great poem and unfortnitly i can't find much to criticize. however i found it very hard to understand the click and what you ...

Hey suspennz this is dogs right now i like your poem, however you need to use the proper grammer. you can't say "streetz" and on the first line i would ...

hey jasmine. this is dogs and i think that you poem is great However in the first stanza when you say "you can dent the pavement with the souls of ...

hey lilchoma. dogs here I think that this poem is good, but it needs some work. i think that in the first line the word shoeless makes it a little ...

hey angels, dogs here i think your poem is great i really like the discription and how you talk to the hermonica. ignore bludragon i understand this perfectly. however in ...

hey welcome. i am rather new my self. This was very impressive for someone your age. i think that this is a lot better than you other poem. however are ...

hi i don't think i have ever reviewed you but sometimes i can be a little rough hey raimunda i think that this is a great piece but it needs ...

#1 hello, they arn't any chorus in a poem #2 in the first stanza you say "i don't need her and lonely is the way" first of all that needs ...

.............................................. THAT WAS AMAZING ABSOLUTELY UNDESCRIBABLE. I CAN TOTALLY RELATE. this flow very well and the entire theme is very clear. i think that this is an absolute

this was amazing and i really enjoyed reading it. i like your imagination. i can't find anything wrong to tell you the truth. i think it flows well and you ...

thank you for all your help, i guess i will try to add a metaphor. i really appreciate it TuckEr EllsworTh