dogs

hey hey hey. dogs here apart from the grammar errors i loved reading this poem. the ending was my favorite part!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i really got the meaning in this poem. i ...

Those fake smiles. Those false voices. Those innocent faces. The ripped out my happiness, and gorged them selves on my pain. Those killing savages. Those murederous creatures. They pierced my ...

thankyou kiwalker and praisjoe for the good reviews =D =P forever zoey :evil:

hey "break my heart" dogs here I loved reading your poem and it really sounds great. i can't find any spelling errors or any errors for that matter Overall this ...

hey paperdollx this is dogs here I really really enjoyed reading your poem it sounds great and it has a very strong ending my favorite stanza is the is the ...

hey Chevy, this is dogs and i am going to be your critic. I love this poem. i really really really like it. it flows nicely sounds good, and i ...

hey hypocrit, dogs here I like this poem but i don't understand at all what you are telling us. the entire second stanza i don't get at all. what do ...

hey hey hey drama queen, dogs here. I love your poem. i completely relate to it totally. this flows really well. and it sounds great the only thing i would ...

hey hey hey drama queen, dogs here. I love your poem. i completely relate to it totally. this flows really well. and it sounds great the only thing i would ...

hey dogs here, I really really really really like this poem and i think that it is overall great. it flows nicely. All of the grammar errors have already been ...

hey hey hey. dogs here I LOVE YOUR POEM!!!!!!!!!!!! it sounds great and i know exactly what you mean. I LOVE the description and how it flows all together. my ...

hey this is dogs here krupp. I really really like your poem and i get that feeling all the time. i think your poem flows well and it sounds great. ...

hey BLUE DRAGON this is dogs here, I really like this poem it flows well and sounds really great. i like the first stanza the best :D but i don't ...

hey pen, dogs here I really really like your poem it flows really well and it has a lot of meaning in it. i can't find anything that has already ...

hey this is dogs, I really think poem, i really like how it flows and it sounds absolutly great. i don't have very much to add to this, but i ...