dogs

You are the sun and the moon, The mdnight shine and the golden glow. You are the flickering light adn teh shattered bulb, The flashing lights and the steady darkness. ...

The Finial Battle We are, The defender of dark. Keeping it at bay, Fighting till the end. A temporary defeat, And a retreat. Midnight rises once again, And the enemy ...

We aren’t a rich family. We don’t have the money for a fancy condominium in Steamboat or somewhere. The year was 2001 December 19th. We were staying with our uncle ...

My world is shattered. My life is broken. My heart is filled, with your desires and lies. Your bright blue eyes, now a crimson red. Your innocent face, now a ...

hey this is dogs here like every one else all of the words mixed up makes it hard to read and it really really gets to me. and exatly what ...

hey this is dogs and i'll be reviewing your poem. first of all you broke the rules. you see we have a two to one ratio here. you have to ...

hey this is dogs. first of all. welcome to YWS. hope you enjoy it here that is quite the title for a poem. and i noticed that the poem really ...

well just please give some suggestions =D

thankyou greyed shina for your suggestions they were very helpful. and ZOEY. for next time would you please actully give me a suggestion instead of just saying how bad it ...

My world is shattered. My life is broken. My heart is filled, with your desires and lies. Your bright blue eyes, now a crimson red. Your innocent face, now a ...

hey hey hey, dogs here i liked this poem and i think that this is rather good. however what is the message that you are trying to get across???? i ...

hey moonstar, this is dogs here. I really like your poem. i am not a fan of love stories but this one was okay. I liked it when you reapeat ...

hey winter, this is dogs here I liked your poem and i totally relate to the message. it flows nicely and it sounds pretty good. however i have some quick ...

hey "dreamer", dogs here I really really liked this poem. and i defnitly agree with the message. i would like to go on about the harp but that not why ...

hey kaily this is dogs. you reviewed one of my poems so i guess i'll just return the favor kaily. i am not a huge fan of love stories but ...