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Hiya dogs here. Okey dokey you got some dang good writing I'll give you that. The plot line is solid and it seems like a very concrete idea... however, being ...

GO PERRY HES BY FAR MY FAVORITE CHARACTER! But down to business. Yes those commas. There dangerous they are watch out for them. The story line/plot line seems a little ...

He He thats the best thing I've heard from this story. Thanks for the replies. I fixed all the spacing and what not in word but when I copied and ...

Flash back. The flying beast coming and knocking people off the bridge. Bridge collapsing, heavy breathing, catching breath, running through a dark hallway, a beast erupting from the wall, mutated ...

Okey Dokey Dogs here. A couple quick things about this. 1 this is poetry not a song. 2 having a chorus right after anouther chorus dosnt work so well. The ...

OOO scary realities. They make me sad :( but whatever there are some quick small things I wanted to point out on your piece She was the rock in his ...

Hiya dogs here. First of all this is a good start I enjoyed it. And its got a good ending to that half of the chapter. But there are a ...

Hello dogs here. Okay this is a good starter for a novel. I see lots of potential in this. I really like the discription of the fat princible and how ...

Hiya I'm dogs as you could guess at your service! Okay for starters... But in that crown I'm sure resides A ruby red Not tarnished brown. Well this sure sounds ...

HaHa sounds like the relationship I have with my Girl Friend. Quite intertaining I must say. But enough about me more about your story. It sounds great and it realy ...

Whoa! Great start! I'm impressed by your writing I must say. You make it seem so real which I truly enjoy and it really brings the reader into the moment. ...

Well thanks for the replies on my book. (took me a good long while to find your piece but hey i found it lol) I just have a quick question. ...

*chuckles* okay thanks for the reply. I'll work on that

Lol thanks for the reply luv. okay i'll look into that. P.S: intresting picture u got there....

Well i liked this poem although i thought it was a little ironic with ur picture of a baby writing about love lol (side note) This is a good piece ...