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Hey Frazol, dogs here just giving a couple small pointers. Firstly i really enjoy this poem. It has a simple plot and idea and you convey it well threw your ...

Hehe catchy. I like it. Dogs here just throwing out a few pointers. it flows very nicely but actuly i really dont think it should be in lytic poetry. I ...

Ok thanks for the suggestion! I'll figure something out TuckEr EllsworTh :smt032

OOOOOOOO i like! Hey Dogs here just giving your poem a little tiny pointers cause there is really very little wrong here. that is her heart, i mean - her ...

This is Just to say I've lost that something in the rain and pouring hail Somebody please help me find my secret something lost somewhere Sincerely Someone

For all of you who dont know what Carnation milk is: its powder milk which you just put in water. Sooooo here's a hilarious rhyme. Carnation milk is the best ...

Hey dogs here! firstly i love your poem! i really do enjoy reading it, a simple achievable goal that seems just out of reach. Now i do, however, have some ...

Folded in my arms you're a butterfly in reverse Giving up your wings to deliver my curse Your letting go of Me. Your letting go to Sail to an island ...

Hiya dogs here. First of all I like it so far. Its a good starter but I think that maybe you should "beef" this chapter up. Personally what I enjoy ...

Flash back. Boomer running back on the breaking bridge. The bridge falling, grabbing on to an edge. Climbing down in a tunnel down, transparent tentacle attack someone, running through a ...

Okay quick things. Dogs here and the "How did i do it" kinda unncesiary. But anyways this sounds nice and i think it actully belongs in novels not short stories.... ...

Allrighty Dogs here. Well so far this is looking nice. Im a big fan of your other book you've written on YWS. But I can't really pass too much judgment ...

Okey dokey Dogs here and i just wanted to do the honors of being your first critic on YWS. Also there is a 2:1 ratio in which you must review ...

Whoa nizice! Dogs here and I really enjoyed your story. It has an incredibly strong beginning and my favorite style of a prologue. I also liked the discription of some ...

Hiya dogs here Okey dokey down to business. First of all this is a great POEM. I believe this should actully go in Lytic poetry opposed to short stories because ...