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Hey, dogs here. And haha oh murtuza and your alliteration. But he is right, this is an excellent poem but with a little bit of work you can make it ...

Hey, dogs here. So i totally agree with Lornydoo that this poem needs more emotion or story line to be in this section. If you want to keep it the ...

So this is a new poem i've written where i'm trying to incorporate sound into my writing which is a lot more difficult then it would first seem to be ...

Hey, dogs here. First of all this is a very nice poem with lots of potential. I really like how short it is cause i am a big fan of ...

Hey man! Dogs here, i would just like to say that your poem has a great message that everyone should listen to. Also don't even worry about structure or rhyming ...

REMASTERED! with few grammatical and punctuation corrections. Please tell me all if you like this way or the first way better. thanks! Folded in my arms you are a butterfly ...

Ok Thanks for the reply, given my dyslexic skills im suprised i didn't screw up even more lols. I'll figure something out thanks! TuckEr EllsworTh :smt032

Heeeeyyyyyyyyyyyyy dogs here! I just read your poem and it is AWSOME! Its short, simple, too the point, and it is very smooth. I think that this is a good ...

Heyyyyyyy dogs here just giving out a couple pointers. Firstly congrats on the awesome poem! Despite that one little spelling error i dare say this is one of the best ...

HO HO!!!! Here's a good poem! Dogs here just with a couple pointers. FIrstly, the metaphors you used are awesome! I especially like it when you say "i can feel ...

Oh yes i truly enjoy this poem hey dogs here just saying its, very simple, gets the point across, flows nicely. I dare say there is really nothing wrong with ...

Very nice. I enjoy the uniqueness you put into this poem. Dogs here with a couple little critiques. Firstly, this is just me which makes this a little bias..., personally ...

The night shines bright Where the moon is the only light And butterflies fly on silver wings, Where song birds are the only kings. I see you standing over there, ...

Ok here are the corrections you suggested. I dont think i like it any better but do tell me what you guys think Folded in my arms you are a ...

Heyyyy dogs here. In my opinion i was always a fan of short poetry, although most people i meet don't like it that much so its always nice to see ...