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Re: Tears on my face
Hey guys! Thanks so much for the comments. Woohoo! grammatical win for the dyslexic! Thanks so much for pointing out those little things Angel, i'll fix those. And Joanne, this ...
Nov 26, 2011 -
Re: Tears on my face
Tears run down my face. Things I just can't erase. Your face haunts my dreams, it makes me want to scream. I'm not a perfect person, you of all people ...
Nov 26, 2011 -
Re: Silver Bells
Haha thanks everyone! I took your word Greena for that one line and you're right, it flows a lot better. Thanks so much for the great comments everyone!!!!!
Nov 23, 2011 -
Re: Silver Bells
Hey everyone! Dogs here with my newest poem. Yeah yeah i know it's a little dark for taking some lines from a christmas song... but i like it! Anyways this ...
Nov 21, 2011 -
Re: Lost at Sea
Hey so building off of that, i have made an alternative ending. Please tell me what you guys think!
Nov 20, 2011 -
Re: Lost at Sea
Hey everyone thanks so much for your comments! And yes i used a piece from Greenday, except it was "wake me up when september ends" not "boulevard of broken dreams". ...
Nov 19, 2011 -
Re: Lost at Sea
Hey all! So just came up with another poem and stayed up until like one in the morning writing it and then spent the next three days correcting it. This ...
Nov 19, 2011 -
Re: Blowing Flames
Lyria, i am so sad that there is no LOVE button on as an upgrade to the like button. You know why? CAUSE THIS IS FREKAN AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! and you say ...
Nov 18, 2011 -
Re: Stars that shine forever and ever.
Hey, dogs here! Alrighty angus you have a great poem! I really like your imagist writing style that paints a clear idea in the reader. And the blue makes that ...
Nov 18, 2011 -
Re: Song Birds are the only Kings
Hey!!! Thanks sooo much Lyria! wewinwelose, so sorry i maybe should have clarified "song birds are kings" part. I was considering telling everyone the reason but i decided not to ...
Nov 14, 2011 -
Re: Song Birds are the only Kings
Hey everyone! Dogs here with my newest and coolest poem of mine. I actually wrote this because GeeLyria (aka the coolest person ever! And my favorite person ever :smt112 ) ...
Nov 13, 2011 -
Re: Starlit night
Hey everyone! Thanks so much for your comments and suggestions on my poem! Real quick though, Ignatious, do you mind letting me know specifically which stanzas where the flow was ...
Nov 12, 2011 -
Re: Starlit night
Our love shine's bright through the starlit night, where the moon glimmers and glows on my lonely world down below. I sit alone on my beach, and look up to ...
Nov 11, 2011 -
Re: Neverland
Hello! So here's my latest and greatest expressing my recent emotions. Did i ever mention how hard it is to write positive emotions in a poem?! IT'S GOD NEAR IMPOSSIBLE! ...
Nov 9, 2011 -
Re: Wonderland
Haha thanks all! and yeah i know it's probably not water but thats all i could think of lol. And i put the capitals at the beginning of each sentence ...
Nov 4, 2011
