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Re: Not a soul
Hey so this is the longest poem i have ever written, and the creepiest (at least from my point of view) I want to submit this to one of the ...
Dec 2, 2011 -
Re: Some poems i've written
Hey Chamber! Dogs here for your review, i really loved this piece! You took an overused topic and turned it into something new, putting a different spin on the ball ...
Dec 1, 2011 -
Re: Goodbyes and Missed Time
Hey, dogs here to give you your review for the day! So this is a really nice piece, a little cliche topic but you used the cliche topic and put ...
Dec 1, 2011 -
Re: A Single Rose
Thanks for the awesome comments guys! And Val, really? you like it? Gag i hate it lol. And thand laminated, that's a good idea, i'll play around with the "relief" ...
Nov 30, 2011 -
Re: The Abandoned Park
Hey Anna! Dogs here! I really love this poem! It flows perfectly and sounds great. I really love this poem for my favorite imagist writing style, you really paint a ...
Nov 30, 2011 -
Re: you too will turn to dust, one day
Oh..... my..... god.....DREAM WALKER STOP BEING SO AMAZING! You make us all look bad! This is definitely in the top 10 best poems i have ever read in YWS. This ...
Nov 29, 2011 -
Re: A Single Rose
Hey everyone! This is just a totally random poem i wrote but i kinda like the sound of it. Anyways i am really happy to say I THINK I DIDN'T ...
Nov 29, 2011 -
Re: A Single Rose
Hey everyone! This is just a totally random poem i wrote but i kinda like the sound of it. Anyways i am really happy to say I THINK I DIDN'T ...
Nov 29, 2011 -
Re: My Lost Love
Hey, dogs here. Wussup Deanie! Thanks for your comment on my poem. Firstly i really like this, it's excellently written and you don't find too many poems that talk about ...
Nov 27, 2011 -
Re: Perfect Days
Haha thanks, but sad to say this isn't all mine, as snork pointed out in a few of my other poems i just took bits and pieces from different poets ...
Nov 27, 2011 -
Re: Flee the Mortal Forms
Hey, dogs here. Firstly i would like to say I LOVE EVANESCENCE! and fallen is definitely her best album. Bring me to life is like my favorite song. Anywaysssssssss, i ...
Nov 27, 2011 -
Re: Masked
Hey, dogs here. Well i really like this piece unmarked. The topic is a little cliche and you took that overused topic and made it into something new which is ...
Nov 27, 2011 -
Re: What is age to words?
Hey, dogs here. Hey Luna! I like your piece, it's a very unique topic and i really like how you tell it to the reader. But i still have just ...
Nov 27, 2011 -
Re: Don’t Wanna Be Sad As Blue
Hey!!!!! Dogs here to give you your review for the day! So, this is a great poem with lots of potential. This has some great aspects to it and your ...
Nov 27, 2011 -
Re: Tears on my face
Gotcha Rosey, i changed those 2 and a half stanzas i modified from "My Immortal". Enjoy! TuckEr EllsworTh :smt032
Nov 26, 2011