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  • Other Poetry Re: 24 Hours

    Hey Mist! Dogs here with your review. So... Morning Mist.... you have reviewed several pieces of my work and I haven't gotten a chance to review one of yours. So ...

    Dec 10, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Is it You?

    Hey Chezka! Dogs here with your review today! So this is a great poem. I really like the random sense of rhyming how it is in sometimes and how sometimes ...

    Dec 10, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Vanishing Traintrack

    Oh I have experienced that feeling before! I laughed at this poem. such a great topic! Hey painting, dogs here with your review today. I really loved this piece which ...

    Dec 10, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Done.

    Hey Amber! Dogs here with your review today! Oh and just building off of what rain said, you really need to capitalize all of your "I" or none of them. ...

    Dec 9, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Beloved's Smile

    Hey Artsy! Dogs here with your review today! THis is a great piece of poetry! I really love the imagery you use and how you connect all of that to ...

    Dec 9, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: passenger seat

    Hey Dream! Dogs here with your review for the day. Dream.... you stun me yet again. This is such a fantastic piece. This officially puts you in my top 5 ...

    Dec 9, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Girl at the Door

    Hey Live out loud!!!!! Dogs here with your review for the day! This is a great piece, I really love the imagery you throw in here and how you really ...

    Dec 9, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Curse of the Consolation Prize

    Hey Anna!!!!! Dogs here with your review for the day! Excellent piece! I love how smoothly this flows and how you tell your story about always getting second place. It ...

    Dec 9, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Rain

    Hey Mirasol!!!!! Dogs here with your review today!!! So this is a great piece about rain, it has lot of imagery which I love. You also use a wide variety ...

    Dec 9, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: The Prototype (stick man playing alone outside)

    Hey Ajt! Dogs here with your review today! Oh man I got to come up with a better nick name for you... Any ideas? Because if not I'll just give ...

    Dec 9, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: where reality wilts

    Hey Ancient! Dogs here with your review today! Great piece you got here, very strong topic idea and it is very originally so good job on that. I think the ...

    Dec 9, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: A Lovers Love

    Hey Justin! Dogs here with your review. I agree with everything Anna says. Similes and metaphors and personification in particular make your poetry so much stronger. Also you use a ...

    Dec 9, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Toxic Tongues

    I sit alone, lonely in these empty halls, with discernment and rapacity contaminating the pure air. "Faggot" They lock all the doors just to try to keep my plague... my ...

    Dec 9, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: The Long Road

    Hey Mikko! Dogs here with your review today! Nice avatar! Cute :D. Anyways back to your review, I think this is a good piece of poetry but it dosn't have ...

    Dec 8, 2011
  • Poetry Discussion Re: Favorite poets...?

    Oh definitely Edgar Allen Poe. The best poetry i've ever read! He's not a modernist or anything but I love his work sooo much. Especially "The Raven". I loved "The ...

    Dec 8, 2011


Poetry lies its way to the truth.
— John Ciardi