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Re: 24 Hours
Hey Mist! Dogs here with your review. So... Morning Mist.... you have reviewed several pieces of my work and I haven't gotten a chance to review one of yours. So ...
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Re: Is it You?
Hey Chezka! Dogs here with your review today! So this is a great poem. I really like the random sense of rhyming how it is in sometimes and how sometimes ...
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Re: Vanishing Traintrack
Oh I have experienced that feeling before! I laughed at this poem. such a great topic! Hey painting, dogs here with your review today. I really loved this piece which ...
Dec 10, 2011 -
Re: Done.
Hey Amber! Dogs here with your review today! Oh and just building off of what rain said, you really need to capitalize all of your "I" or none of them. ...
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Re: Beloved's Smile
Hey Artsy! Dogs here with your review today! THis is a great piece of poetry! I really love the imagery you use and how you connect all of that to ...
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Re: passenger seat
Hey Dream! Dogs here with your review for the day. Dream.... you stun me yet again. This is such a fantastic piece. This officially puts you in my top 5 ...
Dec 9, 2011 -
Re: Girl at the Door
Hey Live out loud!!!!! Dogs here with your review for the day! This is a great piece, I really love the imagery you throw in here and how you really ...
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Re: Curse of the Consolation Prize
Hey Anna!!!!! Dogs here with your review for the day! Excellent piece! I love how smoothly this flows and how you tell your story about always getting second place. It ...
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Re: Rain
Hey Mirasol!!!!! Dogs here with your review today!!! So this is a great piece about rain, it has lot of imagery which I love. You also use a wide variety ...
Dec 9, 2011 -
Re: The Prototype (stick man playing alone outside)
Hey Ajt! Dogs here with your review today! Oh man I got to come up with a better nick name for you... Any ideas? Because if not I'll just give ...
Dec 9, 2011 -
Re: where reality wilts
Hey Ancient! Dogs here with your review today! Great piece you got here, very strong topic idea and it is very originally so good job on that. I think the ...
Dec 9, 2011 -
Re: A Lovers Love
Hey Justin! Dogs here with your review. I agree with everything Anna says. Similes and metaphors and personification in particular make your poetry so much stronger. Also you use a ...
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Re: Toxic Tongues
I sit alone, lonely in these empty halls, with discernment and rapacity contaminating the pure air. "Faggot" They lock all the doors just to try to keep my plague... my ...
Dec 9, 2011 -
Re: The Long Road
Hey Mikko! Dogs here with your review today! Nice avatar! Cute :D. Anyways back to your review, I think this is a good piece of poetry but it dosn't have ...
Dec 8, 2011 -
Re: Favorite poets...?
Oh definitely Edgar Allen Poe. The best poetry i've ever read! He's not a modernist or anything but I love his work sooo much. Especially "The Raven". I loved "The ...
Dec 8, 2011
