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Re: Forever Midnight
Hey Stone! Dogs here with your review of the day! This poem is fantastic! And you have done a very difficult thing. You have used imagery and descriptive poetry and ...
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Re: Oath Of Silence
Hey Amy! Dogs here with your review today! Really really good piece of poetry! I love the imagery and description and variety of great words you used here. I also ...
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Re: Magnificent Mansion Chapter 1
Hey! So here is the first chapter of a book I've started writing called the "Magnificent Mansion". This is a murder mystery with the main character Jacque Leferre who is ...
Dec 11, 2011 -
Re: Magnificent Mansion Chapter 1
Hey! So here is the first chapter of a book I've started writing called the "Magnificent Mansion". This is a murder mystery with the main character Jacque Leferre who is ...
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Re: I want you: reviewed version
Kaylaaaaa! This is lovely! This is a huge step forward from your last poem. This is a great piece of writing I really really love it! The third stanza is ...
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Re: I watch you..
Thanks for the P.M. Dogs here for some correction time! ok cool. So in this case, I would suggest that you basically start off the same general way. Now, in ...
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Re: A Home In My Heart
Hey Insanity! Dogs here with your review today! This is a good poem, short, simple, and gets your point across. It is really cute :). I like the idea of ...
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Re: Numbers
Hey Silver! Dogs here with your review today! This is a very good piece of poetry and I really enjoyed reading it. I really love your original style of formatting ...
Dec 11, 2011 -
Re: Mainstream
Hey Story! Dogs here with your review today! Nice poem! I really like it because, like alfredsy said, mainly because of they rhythm and how you execute your topic and ...
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Re: Wait 'til Time Sparks
Hey Alfredsy! Dogs here with your review today! This piece... is so fantastic! I love this entire topic, you gave a "love letter" a new meaning with this completely new ...
Dec 11, 2011 -
Re: I watch you..
Hey Kayla! Dogs here with your review today! So this is a great piece and a great start for a poem. You use a lot of repetition that both works ...
Dec 10, 2011 -
Re: Dear Ms. Nostalgia
Seraph..... were you really worried that this poem wasn't any good....? Like really......... BECAUSE THIS IS AMAZING! So much imagery and so much description, i love the entire eerie and ...
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Re: Dreamer's Prison
Hey Amazon! Dogs here with your review today! Excellent piece of poetry! I really love this kinda abstract topic about dreams because dreams can often be a really easy thing ...
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Re: Eden Part - I
Hey Baron! Dogs here with your review of the day! This poem is really good, such strong imagery and I really love how you rooted all the imagery, description, and ...
Dec 10, 2011 -
Re: The price of love
Hey Everyone so this is actually a piece I submitted to the madness contest thingi. This is really the first short story I have written in a long long time. ...
Dec 10, 2011
