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  • Other Poetry Re: Forever Midnight

    Hey Stone! Dogs here with your review of the day! This poem is fantastic! And you have done a very difficult thing. You have used imagery and descriptive poetry and ...

    Dec 11, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Oath Of Silence

    Hey Amy! Dogs here with your review today! Really really good piece of poetry! I love the imagery and description and variety of great words you used here. I also ...

    Dec 11, 2011
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Magnificent Mansion Chapter 1

    Hey! So here is the first chapter of a book I've started writing called the "Magnificent Mansion". This is a murder mystery with the main character Jacque Leferre who is ...

    Dec 11, 2011
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Magnificent Mansion Chapter 1

    Hey! So here is the first chapter of a book I've started writing called the "Magnificent Mansion". This is a murder mystery with the main character Jacque Leferre who is ...

    Dec 11, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: I want you: reviewed version

    Kaylaaaaa! This is lovely! This is a huge step forward from your last poem. This is a great piece of writing I really really love it! The third stanza is ...

    Dec 11, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: I watch you..

    Thanks for the P.M. Dogs here for some correction time! ok cool. So in this case, I would suggest that you basically start off the same general way. Now, in ...

    Dec 11, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: A Home In My Heart

    Hey Insanity! Dogs here with your review today! This is a good poem, short, simple, and gets your point across. It is really cute :). I like the idea of ...

    Dec 11, 2011
  • Narrative Poetry Re: Numbers

    Hey Silver! Dogs here with your review today! This is a very good piece of poetry and I really enjoyed reading it. I really love your original style of formatting ...

    Dec 11, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Mainstream

    Hey Story! Dogs here with your review today! Nice poem! I really like it because, like alfredsy said, mainly because of they rhythm and how you execute your topic and ...

    Dec 11, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Wait 'til Time Sparks

    Hey Alfredsy! Dogs here with your review today! This piece... is so fantastic! I love this entire topic, you gave a "love letter" a new meaning with this completely new ...

    Dec 11, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: I watch you..

    Hey Kayla! Dogs here with your review today! So this is a great piece and a great start for a poem. You use a lot of repetition that both works ...

    Dec 10, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Dear Ms. Nostalgia

    Seraph..... were you really worried that this poem wasn't any good....? Like really......... BECAUSE THIS IS AMAZING! So much imagery and so much description, i love the entire eerie and ...

    Dec 10, 2011
  • Narrative Poetry Re: Dreamer's Prison

    Hey Amazon! Dogs here with your review today! Excellent piece of poetry! I really love this kinda abstract topic about dreams because dreams can often be a really easy thing ...

    Dec 10, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Eden Part - I

    Hey Baron! Dogs here with your review of the day! This poem is really good, such strong imagery and I really love how you rooted all the imagery, description, and ...

    Dec 10, 2011
  • Action/Adventure Short Stories Re: The price of love

    Hey Everyone so this is actually a piece I submitted to the madness contest thingi. This is really the first short story I have written in a long long time. ...

    Dec 10, 2011


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