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Hey Mystical! Dogs here with your review today! I don't know if i should have but I found a lot of this story really funny and then I realized at ...

"Dimly shining streetlight" A very good line but I think it would sound better if you say: Dimly lit streetlight "She looked in fact like a little angel" Hahahaha how ...

"I Do not want to be discovered by these men" I don't like this line, it is awkwardly worded and it doesn't explain why, I mean I definitely understand why ...

Hey Monica! Dogs here with your review today! Firstly I really love your avatar and welcome to YWS! I hope you enjoy it here! So this is a good poem ...

Hey Skorpionne! Dogs here with your review today! I really like the idea and abstraction of this piece. Personally I like the style of structure that you have done for ...

Heyyyyyyy Insanity! Dogs here once again with my review for you! This was a really good piece and the rhyming in here really made it good. I do suggest, however, ...

Hey Fire! Dogs here with your review today! And Insanity shhhh! Pumped up kicks is a terrible song. This poem is really good, I really like the repetition in here ...

Hey Misfit! Dogs here with your review today! This is a great piece. There is a lot of questions swimming around in the readers head as the read this that ...

Hey Glimmer! Dogs here with your review today! I love your avatar! Such a fantastic movie :D Anywho! This is a very good piece you have here, describing in depth ...

Hey everyone! Dogs here. I'm really sorry this chapter is super long but I encourage you all to read it regardless! Now we start to see everyone's true colors and ...

Helloooo Devan! Dogs here with your review today! I really loved this! I really really really loved this! It has a great message behind it and it was beautifully written. ...

Hey Mirasol! Dogs here with your review today! I really like this poem. It is simple, short, and easy. You have a simple idea and get it across perfectly, and ...

Hey Penquin! Dogs here with your review today! Great story you have here. It is short, simple, a lot happens in a short amount of time, and it isn't overwhelming. ...

Hey 127! Dogs here with your review today! So good poem you have here, this is a great topic about change and how all things good have disappeared. You use ...

Hey Mistie! Dogs here with your review today! This is a really good piece you have here, strong, powerful imagery and description. But I do have a few nitpicks. This ...