dianis97

was very interesting!!...you have a really good hook...goos story, the only thing i don't like was that everyting happened really fast, and you didn't tell us much about your character ...

it was a really nice story, I really liked it, it just kept me on reading. You made a few mistakes tought Quote: You cant tell your best MALE friend ...

Okay, so I wanted to post this, It's really short and It's to that good, I just hope you guys like it. I need all the help possible, so please ...

It was good...but I found a couple of grammatical mistakes, but they were not too bad, I also think you should tell us more about the characters, talk more about ...

Hey everyone, thanks for reading the first chapter, I hope you guys like this, please review I want to know if I should keep posting more. All critique is accepted. ...

wow, that was short, I think this is not fiction Its poetry. I liked it, it isn't my favorite tough some advice: Remember to use coma's you should expand was ...

AMAZING! I really enjoy reading this, it's really interesting and it keeps me wanting more. I really like how you used the spanish, it made it more interesting, there was ...

OMG! that was so cute :D, you did an amazing job. I just want to keep reading the rest of it. I really like how you showed that your main ...

W.O.W, I really liked it, good job! i really like how you showed Hermione's strong emotions and how Ron coonforted her, you did a really good job with the characters, ...

LOL I think its sooo funny!, but I find it a bit weird, but anyways I think it was kind of cool, especially edward not remembering bella's name, good job ...

Hey everyone, thanks for reading the first chapter, I hope you guys like this, please review I want to know if I should keep posting more. All critique is accepted. ...

wow...its a very different from the twilight we all know I think its awesome how you took the characters and developed them in your story, it was really good, i ...

That was amazing!, you captured the characters really well, it really make me feel like if i was reading Stephenie's writing! nice job, I've got nothing bad to say about ...

Hi! Wow I really liked it, it was really good. please keep posting more, the ending was awesome, owever I think you should describe more the character, I would like ...

wow, it was really good, I really liked it I thought the beginning was a bit boring tough, I did get hooked up until the second paragraph. The ending was ...