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nicee!! I liked it, but there were things like: conducting a sexual relationship.. its too formal, just say having sex. and the rest..well, I agree with the reviews, like the ...

i liked it..but it wasn't the Bella and Edward of the book, especially Bella. it went a bit too fast, especially at the end, i also think you should be ...

interesting!! it was a bit short..i agree with Gee, there were a couple of mistakes...but not too many! it's so good!! I really liked it!! awsome job!

third chapter!..I really like this one, hope you guys like it. please review, I want to show this to a couple of people and I really need all the help ...

So, this is the second chapter of unexpected love, in case you guys haven't read the first chapter, Leah in very sad because Emily is pregnant, and then she talks ...

hey! well, i have to say i liked it..but I just think it's kind of...sorry for this, but I think it's kind of boring. There isn't an actual problem, I ...

wow!! i loved it! at the beginning..when you explained what the story was about I thought it was a kind superman..hehe I know, silly. well, it was really good..I have ...

well, so this story takes place after the wedding in renesmee hasn't happened..this is just after the part Jacob returns from the wedding..hope you guys like it. Chapter 1. “Calm ...

it was really good!! I really liked it! it kind of reminded me a little bit about Edward and Bella, the relationship between them, but, you did have a few ...

So, here it is, Jane and Seth meet. It isn't a big deal tough, hope you guys like it!! Chapter 3 On Monday, James and I got ready to go ...

OMG!! amazing job!!..I really have nothing bad to say about was beautiful! loved it I really liked the rain, it made it more romantic, I wish this was in the ...

So, for the ones who didn't read the first chapter this is wat happened Jane (the main character) her brothers James and her mom Tina are going hunting by themselves, ...

Sorry it took me so long to review!...i was traveling Well, this is so much better!...you made really good changes and i really liked it but i still think you ...

It was good, but I think the first part it's better. The hook this time isn't that good, also remember describing a little more your characters, I don't know anything ...

hey!...well so its really late, but I just wanted to post this, I don't think I'll be posting more about this family, but I would really like reviews!...I really need ...