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  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Untitle Short Story - Quick Read, 1,170 words

    When I read my story too I feel like it's a longer version of the back of the book, I guess I need to work on some different writing techniques ...

    Nov 18, 2008
  • Welcome Mat Re: Howdy. I have a short story that I need help with!

    Thanks, I read the rules and that. First, I put my story in the fiction spot where you showed me, but just today I got a message from an experienced ...

    Nov 17, 2008
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Untitle Short Story - Quick Read, 1,170 words

    This is my first short story. I wrote it today. I'd like honest critiques and suggestions. I made all the spelling and grammatical corrections to my best ability. But, if ...

    Nov 17, 2008
  • General Fiction Novels Re: My 1st short story!! :D The Road Less Traveled Part I

    This is a great story, also considering you're from Mexico. Or, I mean, that your second language is English, and that's cool. I'm mostly fluent in french but I could ...

    Nov 17, 2008
  • Historical Fiction Short Stories Re: ww1 Short Story

    I liked it a lot, there were a few things I would've changed but other than that I think it's great. You had a good amount of detail, but not ...

    Nov 17, 2008
  • Welcome Mat Re: Howdy. I have a short story that I need help with!

    This is my first short story. I wrote it today. I'd like honest critiques and suggestions. I made all the spelling and grammatical corrections to my best ability. But, if ...

    Nov 17, 2008


He began to wonder why he had felt uneasy at all. It was like a man wondering in broad daylight why a dream had appeared so terrible to him at night.
— Chinua Achebe, Things Fall Apart