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Re: Wiping Away My Tears
Miriam, Great job. I really loved the poem and not because you are my best friend. It's because you are a really good poet and I hope to see and ...
Jul 11, 2010 -
Re: Broken: Chapter One
I agree with all of them, it does seem like it is a prologue instead of a chapter because chapters are longer. But on the other hand you did do ...
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Re: A man, a cat and the moon
That was a really good poem. I just have to say that you are a really good writer and keep writing. Never let go of your reall really good talent. ...
Jul 10, 2010 -
Re: Grounded
That was a really good poem. I have no advice to give you. Just to tell you that you were excellent with writing this poem. Great job and keep writing.
Jul 10, 2010 -
Re: Wonder
Wonder By: Desiree Rinehart I wonder Where will I be in five, ten years? Or even tomorrow? Nobody knows because It's the wonder of the world. Nobody know whether they ...
Jul 10, 2010 -
Re: My Story of the hard times with my mom
The Hard Times By: Desiree Rinehart Chapter 1 My name is Desiree and since I was 12 I knew my mom had a sickness called pulmonary fibrosis, also known as ...
Jul 9, 2010
