denj

Hey everyone! I haven't posted for a little while, but I've still been around the forums. The previous two chapters of my story haven't gotten a whole lot of attention, ...

Once again, very nice job, but a few more mistakes this time. While most Mercedario’s spend their time going out to the ill and the poor and the unjustly accused, ...

Glad you like it! Since this chapter's gotten some attention, I'll go ahead and post Chapter 3 and maybe 4. Thanks for the review! :D

Once again, very nice job, but a few more mistakes this time. While most Mercedario’s spend their time going out to the ill and the poor and the unjustly accused, ...

Wow! This is truly one of the best pieces of writing, if not the best, that I've read so far on YWS. Before I continue to shower you with praise, ...

Well, by Demeter's recommendation, I'm going to post my story, "To Run with Wolves," in chapters here on the forum. This will be the second. The story is finished, but ...

Well, being a wolf lover, when I saw the word "wolf" in your title, I had to take a look. I have to admit, this story needs a lot of ...

No racism intended! :P And the MC actually finds out later that they aren't quite as barbaric as he once thought. There are 18 chapters, so I'd have to make ...

Wow! You really did a great job with this section of your story. Your characters are well-developed and have real substance, which you show through their behavior, dialogue and funny ...

I haven't read the beginning, but this was a good bit. I didn't really find any grammatical errors to nit-pick over, but one thing I found strange was your excessive ...

I, despite being male, immensely enjoyed the entire Twilight saga and Meyer's other book, The Host. I know the series is commonly regarded as "girl books" but I really would ...

Thank you very much for your positive review and comments! Now that I read it over again, I can see what you mean by the "telling not showing." I suppose ...

"In awe of my awesomeness?" and, "a prodigy?" I'm flattered! :P And I don't know if I'd really call myself a patient writer, I just force myself to start writing ...

Well, here it is. This is my first full-length story and probably the only one I've ever really finished. It's set in medieval times and is about an English boy ...

Despite a very few minor mistakes, most of which have already been pointed out, this is a very intriguing and well-written story you've got going. The pacing, which you asked ...