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Re: Domination
Love your description yes absolutely. Good grammar good signals a nice flow to the paragraphs. Metaphors and similes are good to use just dont use it often. work on making ...
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Re: Unravel
Hello Ofir! i think this is a great poem it really expresses feelings in someone. i love it. there is maybe a few things proximtealy guessing but so far its ...
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Re: It's Nonsense, Understand?
The poem gives youre veiw of emotions, which is good but it comes to a piont that people are muddled and then get back on track. It will help that ...
Dec 2, 2011 -
Re: Silent Suicide [I'm Doing My Best Not To Hurt You]
that is a very good thing. at the end you actaully expressed that he was actaully a relative when he was 22 and she is 15. one of the things ...
Dec 2, 2011 -
Re: Contest Entry- Poetry with a wonderland twist!
very funny.really it is.
Dec 2, 2011 -
Re: The boy I fell for
thats is actuall a good poem. i like it.
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Re: Oceans Happiness
Oceans happiness, Will not last, But yet I ponder, Why so fast?
Dec 2, 2011