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  • Art & Photography Re: A man and a bear

    That boy is really cute! i love the bear too! its adorable. ( you might think im strange, thinking a bear is adorable but hey!) love the shading! keep drawing!

    Feb 25, 2012
  • Art & Photography Re: Weridy 1?

    this is my first time doing this so here it goes!

    Feb 20, 2012
  • Art & Photography Re: Dragon Practice....

    You do realize that this a good drawng, but if you have ever played the game Neverwinter Night 2, those lizard things in that game look exactly like that dragon ...

    Feb 17, 2012
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Living in a Storm

    that was actaully a pretty painful poem. but it was painful in a good way. there are lots of people like that living in a storm because they love someone. ...

    Dec 6, 2011
  • Narrative Poetry Re: Nightmare's Hope

    very good and yet so sad. very sad.

    Dec 4, 2011
  • Historical Fiction Novels Re: Ch 16: Back to the Ordinary Lives

    that is a very good page i love it good description and nice everything else ya know? i love it its wonderful and taht picture want to keep the reader ...

    Dec 4, 2011
  • Research Re: Cocky Characters?

    i love cocky characters but sometimes when people write about them they tend to turn snobby. doesnt that happen to you?

    Dec 4, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: Limerick 2

    that is a cute poem. lol that is pretty funny. such and odd way to rhyme lol

    Dec 4, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: Blue Oceans (2 of 3)

    that is a very good poem it catches the eye to read more ya know? good description i really like it though i would say listen to the people that ...

    Dec 4, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: Forgotten

    A promise was made, Between a man, And a woman, They both had promised that, That they would never forget, Their friendship, Their love, But that promise was broken, For ...

    Dec 4, 2011
  • Fantasy Novels Re: In the Arms of a Warlock - Chapter Three

    this is good! i like it! lovely description good wrod phrase and an awesome dream!keep that pencil FLowin!

    Dec 4, 2011
  • Science-Fiction Novels Re: Hellfire

    Hello! i Love your description but killing that young boy, Chris that is so merciless!oh my gosh that is so sad!i was crying on my keyboard when i read that! ...

    Dec 4, 2011
  • Romantic Novels Re: Sometimes, chapter Twenty-five

    Hello! man that is good i really couldnt stop. a lot of people have trouble tryin to get a flow goin for this kind of stuff! i love the description ...

    Dec 4, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Jacob Black's War with a Mozzie

    from the way this was written it is definitly dramatic and by the words you are a jacob black lover right there. beautifully written kind of funny but work on ...

    Dec 4, 2011
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Darkness Within (7)

    Hello! So your first paragraph was great. brilliant description. but right when you got to the point of talking its was just terrible. there is no expression in your words ...

    Dec 4, 2011


Minds are like parachutes. They only function when they are open.
— Sir James Dewar, Scientist