deltadalek

Thanks, I really appreciate your help! About the vultrinos being too emotive, the later installments will explain that part. And knowing his name? Well, I hoped the ESP would explain ...

Yeah, I was not really confident in my work. I am still a rookie, and I don't yet know all the tricks. Thanks! And don't worry, you didn't put me ...

Thanks for the advice! The only problem I couldn't bring myself to fix was the one about the entire giving away the secret thing. I......... :shock: Well, I think that ...

It was supposed to be a short history on love, right? It's JUST FINE, but a little hard to understand :? .

Thanks again. I think that it is not as exciting, but thank you for proving otherwise :D :D

Thanks! I am a new writer and I appreciate any help! :P

A really good read! You brought new light to the story, and I couldn't really find anything that disrupts that flow mentioned in the previous post. The way you described ...

The name says it all, I am a huge Doctor Who fan :D ! This story has so many possible outcomes, I can't wait to see what happens next!