delmarria

This is really funny, and my guess is you're trying to make fun of the Middle Ages (duh...) :D Here are all the corrections and comments (in red text) I ...

Oh my...this is really beautiful. I don't know what else to say. The imagery is nice, and it gives the whole poem a feeling of mystery and love. My favorite ...

Oh my, this must be one of the sappiest poems I've ever written, and I'm sort of ashamed of it. *hides* However, I do want to know whether it is ...

Hi! I really like the poem...I saw the same things that the previous reviewer mentioned, so you should correct those. I also really like that the poem kind of has ...

Hey! No spelling mistakes found, so good job on that score! As for the actual poem... I'm sorry, maybe I'm wrong, but I don't really think you're right there. The ...

Oh I loved this! Like the above reviewer said, it's sort of serious and funny at the same time. It's a little one-sided though, and if you want this to ...

Oh...this is my first time on here, so thanks and *good luck me!* Please shred this poem apart. I want all its possible potential there . Also, I'm not sure, ...

Pouring rain pummels on the roof as an unknown god's anger should. Her sweet lips do beauty unto herself, yet the lips have yet to speak a word. She might ...