delmarria

That is so adorable! I love how the hair falls into her hair, like the hair of those...umm...punks? Emos? I'm not sure, I don't keep up with all the subcultures. ...

Honestly, at first I thought it was a sad poem, until the very end. Maybe you want to keep the happy ending, but it would have been much more touching ...

This poem made me want to cry...its emotion is overwhelming. You didn't show me his cuts on your back, But I saw them when I made love to you. You ...

This all is way better than anything I could ever do... The fourth one is the most awesome. It's a tidal pool, right? You photographed it really well. It could ...

@AdamBH I'm sorry but you're right, you misanalyzed the poem. At least I hope you enjoyed the blueberry pie. ;) But it's a good idea, what you thought of. I ...

I honestly have no idea where you're going with this teenage rebel (I honestly don't like him), but I want to help, so here I am. :D Comments/suggestions/corrections are in ...

Sure, send it on over. :D

All right. I liked your story "much much much" but then the whole rape thing...kind of ruined it for me. I hope the rest of your novel isn't full of ...

Thank you! :D

Thanks for reviewing, Justagirl and TheWalkinDude! Even though this was really sappy you managed to go through all its gunk...:D

Hey First of all, this poem is...well, emotionally wrenching. I just hope that my relationship with my mom never changes... Here are some corrections/comments/suggestions I am now free Now yours ...

The most glaring (to me) was that the Russian guy said 'gut' and 'yah'. I understood that those were German words, but Delmarria didn't pick it up, so maybe it ...

Hi! Honestly, when I first clicked on this, I thought I would see some poem expounding on how awesome Christmas is, lalala (no offense taken, I hope). I was pleasantly ...

So this is what I have been missing out on, all these years without television...

Hi! This was a really good short story, and I really liked reading it (a cool and spooy interpretation of what WW3 might look like...). The other reviewers already found ...