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That's okay :D Everyone keeps calling me sexist because they haven't read the whole thing

Did you actually read the whole thing?

This wasn't rap though. I have no disrespect towards women. I guess, you can always look through a cover and judge

The ever great pengtingking

Actually, it accidentally went to a paragraph at first so I edited it and you started the review before I edited it so it's not your fault

Shock or what?

Not really, thanks!

It only had two swear words

I was talking about the world

If I delete the last line, this "poem" wouldn't be under humor. I'm very cold was supposed to make no sense. The last line made sense as it was a ...

Thanks I will proof read it and it was rushed. I based the main character off of Bruce Campbell. This is a story that unravels over time. You get more ...

He was talking about Ash's extremely dark, dry humor

Terrible sense of humor?

It's a satire :D This is poking fun at how utterly tasteless they are :D I 100000000000000000000000000000% hate swag. Thanks for the review

Hey CrystalPony. Thanks for the review :). This is a "feel good" poem.It's supposed to be short