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Drrrrrrruuuuuuummmmmrrrooooolllll!! *Shoots confetti into the air.* *Trumpets blare a fanfare. Do do dodo da de da dum!!!!* patapatapatapatapatapatapata That good enough for you? :D Welcome welcome we

Hiya and welcome! So, the rules haven't been up for a while so I'll go over them real quick. 1)No CAPS or chatspeak. ITS'S REALLY annying and ppl cnt undrstnd ...

Mmm, this was an interesting story. It seems kinda Harry Potterish, LOTRish. But that's ok. The small house I lived in imploded, with wood shards flying everywhere. I ducked instinctively, ...

Well! I'm glad you don't bite! :P Hiya and welcome to the crazy website of YWS!! It's a good thing you aren't shy on here, you get conversations with everyone ...

Hey!!! I wanna say real quick, I love the Lucy name. It's awesome. Like Holly, I really didn't see much stuff to nitpick. But I do want to talk about ...

Hi yumyums, I can see you're a new member, so welcome! Before I start, I want to say, you need to have 2 reviews for every story you post. It's ...

Hiya and welcome to YWS, our website for crazy, brilliant writers! :D We have some rules here that need to be followed. (Don't you dare grumble! I can hear you. ...

Hey Leth, this isn't that bad. I like it! I only saw one teeny tiny thing. Boon snapped zenzen's reins and they quickly began to move forward, quickly moving faster ...

Hiya and welcome!! I agree, this is a totally awesome page. All the other forums are cool, but this one's one of my personal favourites. :D So, at YWS, we ...

I agree, it's very good. But not perfect. :D First of all, I want to say that you need to keep a 2:1 ratio with Literary stuff. You need to ...

Yes!!! That was awesome! Great job Rosey!! I think I did like, maybe 6 reviews. But you rocked the house!! :D

You can even get this from an actual Greeter. We don't always have time to greet all the newbies. So we love it when you guys come in and step ...

Well, this part is pretty good too. :D It's really coming along. But there are some things that need to be sorted out. Once she was positive he was gone ...

Interesting story. Kinda Twilightish, but don't get me wrong, it was good. :D But I have a few nit-picks for you. But my nit-picks are about your characters. So we ...

Okay, this is an interesting story. but it's really looooooonngg! :D Even though you say not to read this, you scare reveiwers away! We don't like reviewing looooonnnggg storys. But ...