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Just let it become part of the story. Put it all in italics, don't force it, make the movement, melt into it. :) Hope this helps.

Hmm how about short stories? :)

Mrs Frisby and The Rats of Nimh anyone? Yeh that's a great book. Shows it quite good.

You ever been reading a story. Say YA. When all a sudden something totally random and unexpected happens. That inexplicably gets the Heroes out of trouble no matter what. One ...

Say I've not written one of these, and when I come to try and explain what happens in first part at least. I can't decide which events are the most ...

I'm left handed and hate when I smudge my work when writing. It's really hard. You know where discrimination comes from? If ya want to know I'll tell ya.

For the police most people in Oban call them "The pigs" XD

It's said by someone that "When you kill a character you're killing part of yourself." So try think of each character as maybe a part of you.

In my story prositution is actaully kinda forced because female slaves are put out on street and for marriage no idea. Though i'd feel pretty angry if said person continued ...

Well could ya say the girl in The Ring(Original) is natural? Anyway I agree my worse bad guy a human, but, god, he is not someone ya ever want to ...

Don't we all have problem of getting a certain shade to explain an object or such. Well I'm putting some help down, but only the primary colours. Rest is up ...

We all have this trouble trying to decribe a group of something. Well this site may help us. Here some examples # An assembly of toys (-suggested by Brian French, ...

Adam we all are, but we can't go without details none of us are thieves. We all want same thing and your ideas to someone else may seem rubbish. So ...

Turkish Coffee. Like sweetened battery acid. (I.e. Tastes good, and one sip will keep you up for days) Lets be fair and not ask how Dan knows how battery acid ...

So I've known about this area for a while, but only just thought what i should post. I'm working alot since prelims coming soon i also have to study anyway. ...