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Okay, I still feel this starts too fast. You need to make somethings clearer. You need some more character development and check grammar, you mispell some words. Also transition bit ...

I'm left handed and hate when I smudge my work when writing. It's really hard. You know where discrimination comes from? If ya want to know I'll tell ya.

Sorry moving bit fast Mad. This will speed it up a bit and yes Fire it's huge emphasis on *huge*. Also I read number one. I saw where it failed ...

Is one of YWS very own mod squad :D.

Wondering now if I'd gone insane I walked or more like ambled over to Pingu with Choco. Smiling for first time since this I ignored the blognews titles, "Well-Pingu-how-are-ya-don't-go-into-fantasy-se

Clark turned to him. Laughing in his head in a utter fit Paul made his face solemn, "She's one of the traitors. Kill her. Humans should be superior." The guy ...

Walking quickly Paul was now about five miles from Empire State building. Luckily he was well prepared for most senarios. He glanced around where he stood. No one would come ...

Lives in somewhere called Tureen O_O... huh.

Hey Arvy welcome back. Long time no see. So what ya been up too? Alot has changed on YWS if ya've not noticed lmao. :D :p ;)

For being Arvy :D otherwise Arvandor.

The descent up was hard. And with this gold armour on it was even goddamn harder. I heard a low howl and swung around almost falling, seeing a little wolf ...

I gulped when I saw vast size of army over the hill, "Who the feck wrote this book." Choco shrugged looking less inclined to attack. Just then up the walls ...

I nodded towards Choco and grinned, "Nah lets got to The Whovians!" She just stared at me. Pulling out my sword I saw it broad one quite heavy and looked ...

Username: Vernon Mini-animal: White Wolf Sucked in from: Home (Bedroom) Landed in: Fantasy section Specific: None Description: Black hair, with long fringe, 5,8 in height. A tattoo of dragon on ...

^ POETRY! XD