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Here she is milking anything she can. Talk about desperate :/.

Okay basically, chapter 1 been shortened. This makes this chapter 2. So now old chapter 2 is chapter 3. Confused yet? Anyway, tell me if you can suggest how to ...

Of course hell exists! If there's a heaven (which there is), then there's a hell. And how? Proof be necessary. You can't just say of course and not give proof. ...

Firstly I agree with basically everything Peri says. But I didn't realize they were vampires. They seem more wolf like. The way they act. I thought they were wolves. It ...

That was amazingly well written, I so hope you win the compition. It deserves it. I'm came here willing to critique, but the solidness of this peice blew me clean ...

Maybe it's just me, but this story would probably be more effective told from third person. The scene you establish is great, but what would make it better is if ...

Firstly, Nate is right this is very very confusing. You start out with a long kinda cliche beginning. It's not so bad, but I had no idea it was a ...

I well and truly deny existence of hell. Now my reasons, seems too perfect, in unperfect world all good go to heaven all bad go to hell . Is it ...

Again I ask what if one hell doesn't exist? My theory is hell a man made idea, just sort people who needed controlling. I don't believe in it.

Please, someone else post... :(.

I don't know... you're probably going to kill me for saying this, but I don't think it's right to call yourself an athiest and yet still celebrate a Christian celebration. ...

Adams Waking up drowsingly he heard someone coming, his eyes shot open. A person was coming with a pillow. He tried to move to struggle, the morphine was making it ...

Heck the look into my eyes bit seems corny... :/. Maybe he has inside help.

LES MISERABLES! Only one I've seen but love it. There one I so wish I could see it's Jekyll & Hyde and the music level nears if not does surpass ...

I get it trying to go into blogs. And I've tried it like countlessly :/.