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Re: Mom
Hello, I'm Vernon and I'll be your reviewer, I understand this is personal, but I seriously wish you hadn't post this on here, kept it for a blog or something, ...
Sep 9, 2009 -
Re: 10 and 11 year old Thugs brutally torture two boys.
It's a UK case. Shades of the 1993 torture-murder of two-year-old Jamie Bulger by two ten-year-olds . It is indeed Karsten, I remember outcry about that some time early 21st ...
Sep 8, 2009 -
Re: 10 and 11 year old Thugs brutally torture two boys.
Absolutely horrific! :thud: :( :( :( Two vicious young thugs tortured a pair of friends during a sickening attack that left one of them on the brink of death. The ...
Sep 7, 2009 -
Re: Mistake (rated R)
Hello I'm Vernon and I'll be your reviewer, now this didn't seem exactly like poetry, but nonetheless it does have poetic elements so agree with rap idea. Now, bit of ...
Sep 5, 2009 -
Re: Tangible Mirages
Travelling the mind expanse, the outlook and span, impressive, amazing and gorgeous. A desert with sparkling sands coloured grey, a storm of cortex of desires and beliefs. Gasping for relief, ...
Sep 5, 2009 -
Re: A Cutter's Lullaby
Okay, I'm Vernon and I'll be your reviewer. Now lets make it clear here, I don't like the theme of the poem, I don't like what's it's about. I'm not ...
Sep 5, 2009 -
Re: The Roses Have Wilted
The roses have wilted since the last time I've been here. What were once bright, red petals alive with the days we lived, are now dried up remains, black as ...
Sep 5, 2009 -
Re: The Death of Promethius Jebediah Wulf III
Okay, this was surreal, I'm normally harsh as hell, but utterly lost here, seem almost like a limirick that went on. This would actually go well with music, something you ...
Sep 5, 2009 -
Re: dont let him take you down
The best of the best have sleepless nights They just can’t evade his grip so tight Every day as he passes by Many a men than say god bye He ...
Sep 5, 2009 -
Re: Welcome to Auschwitz
Children cry in the dead of night screaming for solace As their mothers try to tell them it’s alright as they are told to hush, be quiet The silence is ...
Sep 5, 2009 -
Re: Stranger Borne From Ego
Exactly! Glad someone understood this :).History is always written by the victors, that for ages we thought the celts were a savage people etc. So, yep you were right :).
Sep 3, 2009 -
Re: Stranger Borne From Ego
There came a time once long ago, through future, present and past. He moved his name was known, his talent refined. With agressive ease and astounding cleave. A decade was ...
Aug 30, 2009 -
Re: The Space Inbetween
I was thinking about changing this into lyrics, but it's in here because I don't know a good song composer/musician and I can't write music. Therefore it will stay a ...
Aug 30, 2009 -
Re: Report A Site Bug
SQL ERROR [ mysql4 ] Too many connections [1040] An sql error occurred while fetching this page. Please contact an administrator if this problem persists. Earlier today across whole site.
Aug 30, 2009 -
Re: Misguided Angel
Rip it to shreds :) Misguided Angel She holds a mauve rose At the crest of her breast And stares out upon the calm, A blue captive ocean in his ...
Aug 30, 2009
