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  • Lyric Poetry Re: Mom

    Hello, I'm Vernon and I'll be your reviewer, I understand this is personal, but I seriously wish you hadn't post this on here, kept it for a blog or something, ...

    Sep 9, 2009
  • Lounge, The Re: 10 and 11 year old Thugs brutally torture two boys.

    It's a UK case. Shades of the 1993 torture-murder of two-year-old Jamie Bulger by two ten-year-olds . It is indeed Karsten, I remember outcry about that some time early 21st ...

    Sep 8, 2009
  • Lounge, The Re: 10 and 11 year old Thugs brutally torture two boys.

    Absolutely horrific! :thud: :( :( :( Two vicious young thugs tortured a pair of friends during a sickening attack that left one of them on the brink of death. The ...

    Sep 7, 2009
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Mistake (rated R)

    Hello I'm Vernon and I'll be your reviewer, now this didn't seem exactly like poetry, but nonetheless it does have poetic elements so agree with rap idea. Now, bit of ...

    Sep 5, 2009
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Tangible Mirages

    Travelling the mind expanse, the outlook and span, impressive, amazing and gorgeous. A desert with sparkling sands coloured grey, a storm of cortex of desires and beliefs. Gasping for relief, ...

    Sep 5, 2009
  • Narrative Poetry Re: A Cutter's Lullaby

    Okay, I'm Vernon and I'll be your reviewer. Now lets make it clear here, I don't like the theme of the poem, I don't like what's it's about. I'm not ...

    Sep 5, 2009
  • Narrative Poetry Re: The Roses Have Wilted

    The roses have wilted since the last time I've been here. What were once bright, red petals alive with the days we lived, are now dried up remains, black as ...

    Sep 5, 2009
  • Narrative Poetry Re: The Death of Promethius Jebediah Wulf III

    Okay, this was surreal, I'm normally harsh as hell, but utterly lost here, seem almost like a limirick that went on. This would actually go well with music, something you ...

    Sep 5, 2009
  • Narrative Poetry Re: dont let him take you down

    The best of the best have sleepless nights They just can’t evade his grip so tight Every day as he passes by Many a men than say god bye He ...

    Sep 5, 2009
  • Narrative Poetry Re: Welcome to Auschwitz

    Children cry in the dead of night screaming for solace As their mothers try to tell them it’s alright as they are told to hush, be quiet The silence is ...

    Sep 5, 2009
  • Narrative Poetry Re: Stranger Borne From Ego

    Exactly! Glad someone understood this :).History is always written by the victors, that for ages we thought the celts were a savage people etc. So, yep you were right :).

    Sep 3, 2009
  • Narrative Poetry Re: Stranger Borne From Ego

    There came a time once long ago, through future, present and past. He moved his name was known, his talent refined. With agressive ease and astounding cleave. A decade was ...

    Aug 30, 2009
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: The Space Inbetween

    I was thinking about changing this into lyrics, but it's in here because I don't know a good song composer/musician and I can't write music. Therefore it will stay a ...

    Aug 30, 2009
  • Information Desk Archive Re: Report A Site Bug

    SQL ERROR [ mysql4 ] Too many connections [1040] An sql error occurred while fetching this page. Please contact an administrator if this problem persists. Earlier today across whole site.

    Aug 30, 2009
  • Narrative Poetry Re: Misguided Angel

    Rip it to shreds :) Misguided Angel She holds a mauve rose At the crest of her breast And stares out upon the calm, A blue captive ocean in his ...

    Aug 30, 2009


Be led by your talent and not by your self-loathing ... everything beautiful in the world is within you.
— Russell Brand