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I agree with Brad, this is angst and doesn't really make me feel anything. Sounds very emo-ish and poor me. You do try and at least approach it differently, but ...

Something is knocking the window - it's just a branch missing its tree. Somewhere a light flashes - it's just a car missing its map reader. Something lurks under the ...

*I know but... I really don't know what to do here and it's sort of cofusing to me. Plus, everyone's making such long posts that I'm going to have to ...

Real Name: Prof. Jonathan Crane Aka: The Scarecrow(Hero/Villain name, if they have one. This doesn’t count if you’re a civilian.) Age:Middle aged Hero, Villain or Civilian: Villian Power(s): (Only

* Sorry, but I think I have drop out :( * Why? I've barely any people really posting in this, it's hard enough as it is.... :/ ---------------- Listening to: ...

when you lose someone close to you heart and you whole world falls apart you cant carry on but you must be strong cause pple depend on you tears fall ...

I'm for the war in Iraq, therefore I have no reason to hate George Bush. And if people hate him so much, why was he elected? Anyway, I think poilitics ...

This is (probably) a novel not in chapters. I'm not used to writing for an audience, but that is what this piece is intended for - an audience. I usually ...

Very interesting, some of the spacing bit weird like this: I laugh, And smile. Oh no. Here comes another. Attack. See it's not right spaced out. Other than that, can't ...

Fix colour, fix puntuation and then pm me to reread it also from what I noticed you spoke once in chat speak. The people pass w/out a care And suddenly, ...

This type of poem is very poor and mainstream version of it. It personally sounds more like a song and it just drones on and on. I got bored after ...

Hmm, sorry to be harsh but 'so!' we all know this. We want to be interested not read some contrived poem about the problems of the world, unless you write ...

Hmm, J.C Belding I can't decide if i like this or not, one thing it does have some great word choice, but you tell us something. The first rule of ...

Don't play it, but here. You encounter Vernon who lunges at you with non-politically correct rants about the world! Or You encounter Vernon who attacks with voice of an angel ...

*heads/desk* No, she attacked a belief. Look, Blacktiget, tell us why ya disagree with Tiffany on the one-night stands. Don't just say no and not tell us. Now please just ...