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Re: Crime has Tails
Name: Carlos Clooney Age: 27 Gender: M Embassy: UK/MI6 Rank: Rookie (Just out of University: Picked up by MI6 for exellence in computing and forenstics. Personality: Casual, open-minded, compassionate
May 11, 2008 -
Re: Day of Silence
Well, so long as they're against the "bullying and harassment", then I think the shooter had a right to be against the sexual harassment that boy put him through. Flirting, ...
May 11, 2008 -
Re: Truly Alive
I like this poem mostly it was well written, this stanza here though: And when the dream still lingers above me when the morning sun hits my blankets, in that ...
May 11, 2008 -
Re: In war, victory is a vision
I disagree with lin night... this poem works well with the wordiness I saw a ton of imagery, the title caught my eye but I love how ya made the ...
May 11, 2008 -
Re: Let It Go
Oh god... teenage angst... telling us a lovely story but never showing us. Lovely... this is nothing new, not near, it's a series of feelings but no worthwhile tangible ones. ...
May 11, 2008 -
Re: deleted.
It is to be fair unique but still you use a lot of cliches which weaken it. Love poems generally not a good idea until you can approach it with ...
May 11, 2008 -
Re: Death of a Fairy
This was long, but it didn't bother me. The problem was you don't keep the seriousness of a poem like this. It didn't bore me. But when you took away ...
May 11, 2008 -
Re: Dawn and Dusk
Adna, I'm afraid I missed what this was about, but what I read though unclear and a little abstract. I very much like. It's got beauty in those lines, best ...
May 11, 2008 -
Re: Snow Falls
With the falling of the snow comes silent blanket of white powder that brings a certain joy. Snow flakes land in my hand only to melt away. The free falling ...
May 11, 2008 -
Re: Love...
One question: "Why?" You tell us how love is, but that's nothing new to use, tell us why? Don't just keep on saying how it is without showing why it's ...
May 11, 2008 -
Re: My Desert Rose
Very well... it's all good and well telling us this, but how does she make ya feel? How do ya feel when near her. Telling us everything, bores us, as ...
May 11, 2008 -
Re: Bisexuality: straight, gay, or lying?
If God loves everyone why can't we. Love isn't one, plain thing. A love for a family member is different from the love of a spuse or love of a ...
May 10, 2008 -
Re: Antithetic Love
*Left now*
May 10, 2008 -
Re: Yes, Little Rock
Creepy, and shocked me. I never expected the brother to do it. And way he seems at first he seems a totally differenet person to after here: “Hey, Alana, you ...
May 10, 2008 -
Re: lies
It's very different, don't agree with lies being like Spiders, as I love them, but it's from ya mind so won't be too nit picky about it. Now on second ...
May 10, 2008
