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"Well now you know, i hope you understand your postition Godferry?", sighed the Guard. "i do", replied Goderry solemly. "Well Godferry i like you and your singing, sighed the Guard, ...

Marko charged at Resputo with his sword straight out an dagger gripped so hard he was bleeding. Resputo just turned round to see Marko charging at him with his dagger ...

The magic was old which Marko has used he fell in exaustation he was going to cause a huge big massecre, he drew his sword drew his dagger "i must ...

Marko relized Julieanna was right he needed to survive , so he cast a spell to raise moral of the troops, an too raise their strength. Meanwhile Aurora was running ...

God ferry walked away quietly snickering, how he loved to annoy the guards, and what he loved even more, was that they could do nothing to harm him. He looked ...

Caleb eyes opened wide in shock. "We need to retreat now Marko" screamed Caleb "Not without Rose"replied Marko difiantly "NO TIME MARKO RUN, EVERYONE RETREAT TO THE CASTLE" shouted Caleb

True Lives near the sea.

^Is a super critque.

Great TBR an the title was great, i had to read it not too long not too short.

6/10 no idea what song it is.

Well done Backgroundbob, you would be knighted now, but my sword taken a life of it own.lol

When the performance was over, Godferry slouched back to his room, when all of a sudden something jumped down out from a dark. When he had gotten over the shock, ...

Use other langauges, i use latin sometimes; or just make up a word.

"Greetings Brave Caleb an Marko fianlly i meet you Caleb sneered Resputo." "Where Rose Marko shouted loadly." "Oh she testing out one of my new toys, to see if it ...

Bane stopped in mid track an stood their, he looked at his chest sticking out was a blade. "Dam you, i'm not dead yet though Bane cackled lunging at Caleb ...