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Erm does fate count as a person probably not then. I agree most people are kind and considerate .

Okay the first line has been used over and over, maybe think of something original.

Okay i'll forget i saw that that i think.

Is this your old one, cause i imainge you've a new one.

God that is powerful poem, i could almost see the scene.

Finally i can be bothered to notice a mistake, Pierrce is spelt Pierce.

This is great Liz i really like this poem. PS How many Poems you write, for i'm going to kill myself if i keep staring at this damn computer screen, ...

It was really good Liz, and Emma right don't put your self down i'm always telling you not to do that.

This is a good poem Liz, it seemed like it came right from the heart.

I read this, and i can't say much more you must have been angry fro some reason.

I like both poems, and the wording for obth of them are great. PS I'm no crique.

I've read it and it sad and happy, at parts all together it's a great poem.

Liz i see no probelm with you poetery, but this is the guy that is morbid so my opinion don't matter probably.

I've read it Liz, and yes i am going through all your poetery, only because some of it good and because i love you so much.

It did move too fast, but i liked it, probably because it was about a warrior.