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Well i'm done, oh yeah here a thing word Smemuzzle lol..

How about this Gray for a name of someone and Grey as the colour, cause Gray like this looks better as a name of someone. Then both parties win. :D

A friend of a friend he got beaten.

I agree it is hard to understand i can't quite put my finger on it, but it seems difficult to understand.

lol TBR and Twilight Bravo and it did look pooper vacumn our gun or whatever. Now i can see that it is a gun and not a pooper vacumn lmbao.

Indie forgot that and Ska (Madness Rock) erm what else... *shrugs*

Quite good i read the first and wanted to read the second. Yes loads of bad spelling, but that understandable and i want to read more keep it up

Oh by the way Killer Ewok two things i noticed straight away. It's Evil Armada right and no chat speak on this site and in stories. That all i noticed ...

Hey brill story this sound strangely like Charon the boat driver of the river Styx, is that who you based him on cause it does sound like Charon anyway lets ...

I agree with TBR this seems forced and has seemed had to pointed out all the mistake.

That was a great poem but the end kinda ruined it.

Welcome to YWS. *Fan Fare plays* Oh don't mind that anyway hope you enjoy your self.

4) Of Mice and Men - John Steinbeck. Snore? Of Mice and Men is a brillant book. 1.Artemis Fowl: That is all i can think of god i hate that ...

No wonder your getting banned. :x

Granted but you forget how too speak english. I wish for a happy life with Elizabeth where we're both happily together. (Sorry all i can think of *sighs*)