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Love the updates, keep them coming Nate :).

Time of Incident: around 10am GMT Browser: Firefox Template: Default Describe What Happened: When I did a long quote in a new topic about a contest on Wordclay, the content ...

I found out about this stumbling, and not really sure where to post it. Basically it appears to be a very interesting contest. To save people going on I'll quote ...

In the grand tradition of J. Edgar Hoover, who kept dossiers on the sexual habits of politicians and potential political enemies, in order to "out" them when opportune, a Tennessee ...

Hmm, when I read the first stanza I thought oh my god... it's so telling, but after that I was pleasantly suprised, so to echo the rest I say cut ...

I've one problem, never ever end a poem with the title, it's a big let down after such an amazing poem. Try and work out a better ending. But your ...

This is so much worse than I imagined, didn't die but may be addicted now. Who would do such a thing. I hope they arrest the person. God... just so ...

Hmm, this is very navel-gazing. You do have nice imagery but don't really try and relate us to the poem, one way or another. Instead you tell us everything, rather ...

I'm waiting for someone else to post, maybe if Kylan posts I can. Since it's linked to where I am.

Police in Russia are investigating after pupils stripped off their clothes, climbed walls or lay on the floor laughing after their school dinners were spiked with drugs. The teenaged students ...

After much much thought, I realize I love this. It's very unique. Such uplifting and evocative imagery. The comparison you work are shown with such mastery of the english langauge. ...

Hmm, I can't decide, this seems original but the theme isn't really. I can't decide whether I like it or what. You've a nice structure, very good, but it just ...

Wow... wow... wow.... This is so incredibly original, I was skeptical about a story about a pencil being so amazing. You really captured it's soul. Really, I feel this would ...

Hmm, I'll ignore clicheness, this just seemed more like a song. A lot of this would be saved in song format. So my advice, rewrite this as a song format, ...

This is extremly original. You've a great idea, some problems you have is basic grammar, proof-read all work and read it out loud to see if the word is correct. ...