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Alucard :D or Indiana Jones don't yous remember in Raider of the Lost Ark, how he couldnn't be bothered to fight that guy who was an obvious swordmaster, so just ...

Welcome Tyd glad your name nice and short - or easy to say lmao. Anyway hope ya love this site as much as I do :D.

Chapter 11 A fortnight has passed since that horrible night; Tea has lost all defiance and spirit. Jared abuses her non-stop. She has become a shell no longer speaking. Her ...

Adrian woke up once again, his body hungry and cold. He stood up and gazed around. Nothing had changed, the walls still stank(literally) the ceiling still dropped showers of plaster ...

Okay... poetry has punuaction and capital letters. It's harder to read a poem without punuaction look at other poems and you'll see punuaction. :)

Adrian groaned in protest as he woke up. He was stripped except for a lousy loin cloth for dignity. Adrian had never expected Harris's betrayal, then again he hadn't expected ...

Yeh, DD right it's mostly question but lack of puntuaction bothers me. Despite what people say poetry does need puntuaction. Anyway put puntuaction get rid of emoticon and got a ...

Chapter 10 Tea climbed up the stairs head hung and face expressionless, eyes dripping with tears. She navigated the labyrinth of corridors quite easily, never once going a wrong turn. ...

Aww god this is so sweet, i rarely read romantic fiction, but title caught my eye god this is so sweet. I love how they encounter, I hope to see ...

Oooh this is creepy almost surreal-like. Two things don't space out the text that way. You could put it all in italics be good way to show it's a dream. ...

Chapter 9 Alex admired the view out of the window, he wasn’t tired, too much had happened the night before. However, he did appear to be managing, Quinn may be ...

Full Name: Adrian Temperast Gender: Male Age: 25 Birthplace: The Temple of Justice Father's Name: Lorunst Temperast(Grand master) Mother's Name: Ariel Temperast(Grand Mistress) Race:Enlightened Human

Nate... I agree with this sometimes, but in some cases like you want to talk about a story you're writing and you can't really do it easily on pm's. And ...

What about Of Mice and Men - John Steinbeck, Tom Sawyer - Mark Twain, Peter Pan(Forgot author name) That's all I can think of... hold on Arabian Nights( I don't ...

The Power of Five - Anthony Horowitz Mortal Engines - Philip Reeve Remember Me Saga - Christopher Pike Harry Potter and the Goblet of Fire - J.K Rowling The View ...