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I was equally as clueless about "hussy"... I'm not the best at deciding age ratings I'm afraid... except for the obvious extremes! And I don't really write a lot of ...

OK I'll think of a way to make the transition of years smoother. At this point she is well over 18 years old, and has settled in well in her ...

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well if you get nothing else, you can look back at my list :-D I've added a couple more scenes to my play script since I last posted here as ...

Hey there WW! Right, I agree with most of what people have already said about the overused theme. I can't count the number of books and movies on my hands ...

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Tanya, this play was written for a festival, so I had strict time restrictions for the performance. Thus any transitional scenes just had to go. But I will think about ...

wow, yay! number 200!! :-D :elephant: OK about the "auntie" bit, maybe it didn't come through clearly in the text, but Vivica had always demanded to be called this by ...

Hey I want one please! (Or 2) :-D Here's my play script: ...Aut Mortatis Conans: Scene 1 & 2 ...Aut Mortatis Conans: Scene 3 by the way, do you review ...

Thanks for your review! Got a new one for you if you're up for it :) ...Aut Mortatis Conans: Scene 3

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oh dear... haha! ok maybe its not that clear without the colour, but her eyes are closed. she is completely absorbed in the pleasure of dancing. Don't worry, I didn't ...

Thanks for the review! The answer to your question is....Both! I wrote it and acted in it. I'll fix the caps thing! My aim wasn't to make her realistic - ...

This is an alright start...but I feel like something is missing - the hook. the thing that makes me really really want to find out what happens next. I mean, ...