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i have a huge respect for this piece, as i have always been quite the left-handed troll with a paint brush. the detail is amazing, and you've pulled off the ...

Hi there Subliime! i was immediately attracted to your post, as i am a dragon-drawing amateur myself :-D i like your guy. it is kinda difficult to critique the proportions ...

I keep discovering pleasant surprises on YWS! I happened to have a few sketchbooks in my collection, but i consider sketching as a hobby that helps me with my writing. ...

oh by the way, when you said: Sieze i think you might have meant "Cease" which means, Stop. Seize means: "to take hold of suddenly or forcibly; grasp: to seize ...

hey there ninja! OK I like your characters, which I think were the strongest asset of this chapter. I like reading about character interactions myself. that being said, i think ...

for the first poem, did you write it in that style on purpose? it breaks the sentences in the middle and gives it a jagged rhythm. can you explain why ...

try my chicken chow mien which I only ate a quarter of. there was waaaay too much, it could have fed me for a week! :-)

hey, this is a great idea! shucks, thanks :-D please review my poem: "Love from Afar" and my story "The Elephant in the Room" thanks a million! by the way, ...

Ok heres what i like: Tonight, though, was his first. Therefore, he did not know I was lying and that Riley was lying in wait. Or doggy snoring. i actually ...

I'm afraid I have to agree with Jagged. this poem could use a lot more flavour... for example, you could talk about WHY you suddenly see beautiful. This is a ...

thanks for the review Amie! its actually a very recent experience, and i wrote it while i was quite emotional. and you're right, it is very honest. i rarely write ...

This love from afar is bittersweet. My love So close to my heart, so far from my vessel Eliminating touch Eliminating smell Taste I cannot behold you with my eyes ...

ok, i'll start off by saying that i think i understand what borntobeawriter was trying to say with that line: "The man didn’t hesitate. He wrenched himself loose of her, ...

Hi there Durrie! I would like to tell you a bit about what I, the reader, enjoys most. In a story, I like to get to know characters from the ...

Your writing talent seems to have resurrected in this piece! (see what i did there?) I can completely relate, as i feel that writing is so a part of me, ...