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On nearly all my works I get the comments about apostrophies, but it's simply the way I write XD so I'm not really planning on changing it. I just prefer ...

Thanks for the advice !! I'm going to work on showing instead of telling =D Also I'll work on Eric's reactions, guess I was too preoccupied with how Alecia felt ...

Thank you JF !! I haven't actually had time to edit the stories you've reviewed for me yet, I've been way to busy with exam revision and I'm sick because ...

This is beautfiful :D That basically says it all, lol XD Keep writing ! Xxx Do

:D !! Thanks guys !

Thanks you guys !!! Your comments made my day !! :D

Thanks WriterAddict :D Those words are always fun to hear !!

Thanks for your comments :D Harry Potter... the Sirius thing ?? I'm not following you lol :? Not sure what you mean :wink: Nope it's not the end, it's just ...

THANK YOU JF !!! :D wow it looks like you put a lot of work into this!! I'm glad you've told me all this, it's helpful ! Nd WOW you ...

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It's understandable, and i really dont think you'll be removed from the website for this. Good luck with the problems you have right now, hope it ends up alright!

Haha, that's really amusing!! :D Nicely done!

Thanks a lot !! Good advice :D Haha it's funny to find someone who shares a name with a character, hasnt happened before! That's cool :lol:

Thanks for the advice! Some parts are difficult to space, though :? but i think its okay now, or at least better :D

The only real problem you have is the word "the." You use it too much. For example, the first sentence:"Rain poured down intensely from the grey, lurking clouds above me ...